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Title: Safe'n'Snape 24 Aug 2008 1:35 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a great little story. You captured everyone's emotions perfectly. I realy hate GH, by the way! I can totally picture him as a child molester, ugh! I hope he gets thrown in prison.

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, can't say I ever was a fan of him, either. 

    Thank you.

Title: Safe'n'Snape 24 Aug 2008 7:50 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    That was beautifully amazing. It's A wonderful story that will likely stay in my mind for years to come.

    Author's Response: Thanks.
Title: Safe'n'Snape 24 Aug 2008 7:33 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    32 lines up from the bottom (which begins "Severus frowns. He places his elbows on the table..."), you should have continued "...and STEEPLES his fingers...". In other words, he brings his index fingers to a point against each other, like the steeple atop a church.

    What you did put, "...and staples his fingers..."means he had an accident with office supplies. I don't believe that's what you meant!

    Good story, though! I really like it.

    Author's Response:

    No, that's not what I meant, either. I  shall have to take a dive into my dictionary ;)

    Thank you. ^^

Title: Safe'n'Snape 24 Aug 2008 2:02 am
Reviewer: AllyKat (Anonymous) [Report This]
    No! Don't just leave it here!
Title: Safe'n'Snape 24 Aug 2008 1:55 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, I've never seen a story like this on the site before. I don't think I would be good at writing about this subject, you made this story into a wonderful one shot. It was terrible sad and kinda depressing though, lol. Will there be a sequel? If you don't know, that's all right. Brilliant fic!

    Author's Response: I didn't think I'd be, either, to tell the truth. But all of you seem to think so. It was supposed to be kinda sad and depressing, though ;) I don't know if there'll be a sequel, maybe.
Title: Safe'n'Snape 24 Aug 2008 12:52 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor Harry :(
Title: Safe'n'Snape 23 Aug 2008 10:51 pm
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    good one-shot! the perpetrator really is the obvious choice for someone in the books who would abuse harry...
Title: Safe'n'Snape 23 Aug 2008 8:54 pm
Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I have enjoyed your story. I would hate is severus got ahold of him. I alsmost let him get a hold of him I they kill him he will not be missed.
Title: Safe'n'Snape 23 Aug 2008 7:08 pm
Reviewer: Shellie (Signed) [Report This]
    I am with everyone else, this is one of the most well done stories of its type I have read. I truly hope you make it into more than a one shot

    Author's Response: Thanks, and I'm not making any promises.
Title: Safe'n'Snape 23 Aug 2008 6:41 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    It's been a long time since I've checked out a new one-shot and have read it straight through, eyes glued to the screen. This story is brilliant, and it's really one of the best Harry-is-abused stories I've read in a while. You kept Snape in character, and Harry was affected without being completely beligerent or irrational. He's young, he's scared, and he wants the only person who kept him safe. It's as simple as that. Beautiful job. More, please?

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I'm all silly smiles felling utterly proud right now -- praise does that to me. Really, thank you and I'm glad you liked it so. More? Hmm...maybe. I don't know.

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