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Title: Chapter 10 09 Oct 2021 3:12 am
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed) [Report This]
    I know this story is very old but it is a true ten. Well written, in character and kept me riveted. Sad it wasn’t complete but still worth the read.
Title: Chapter 10 09 Oct 2021 3:11 am
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed) [Report This]
    I know this story is very old but it is a true ten. Well written, in character and kept me riveted. Sad it wasn’t complete but still worth the read.
Title: Chapter 10 08 Dec 2017 3:59 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Is it too weird that I am writing my response to your response in your review?

    Maybe it is, but to be honest, I really don't care. Glad that you plan on completeing it! I hope your life gets better, you are one of those few people who really have a valid reason to abandon their fics, you know? Just that I have read so many of the abandoned fics that I just couldn't control myself and give you a piece of my mind.
    And, just to be honest and really nice, I will once again say, that this story is awesome.
    Your Welcome, and I will always be waiting for your shout!
Title: Chapter 10 30 Nov 2017 4:05 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    I am pretty sure you are not going to continue this story, so, pray tell, why should I even consider giving you my service as a BEta? Even when I have some experience? I like Beta'ing, you know, its just the matter of there being nothing to beta! Why do most good fanfics tend to be unfinished? How irritating is that, do you know?

    Anyway, as for the story, the last few paras were a bit heavy, to emotion packed and made me want to strangle Snape, also, I wanted to see it from Severus's perspective, it's almost always more interesting than Harry's.

    Anyway, just to be alive, if you are still alive, I would like to say that I am willing to be a Beta for you.

    PLEASE UPDATE!!!

    Author's Response: I'm not certain what made me check the reviews on this story, but for some reason I did.  It was surprising to see your comments, and I appreciate that you took the time.  To answer your questions, do I know it's frustrating when a fic isn't finished? Yep, I get it. And I'm sorry about that.  Why didn't I finish? To put it bluntly, my husband died very unexpectedly, leaving me with three small children to raise. Between life, death, children, a full-time job, the monster that is grief, and basic survival, I just didn't have the ability to write. The kids are older now, which has challenges too, but I still think about completing this fic. Time is obviously an issue, but so is direction.  I don't remember what I planned! lol. Who knows, maybe your reviews will inspire me. Hopefully this gives you some insight into what happened with this fic.  Thanks again for commenting and also for your offer to beta.  If (when) I continue, I'll give you a shout. :-)
Title: Chapter 6 30 Nov 2017 2:18 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    He hadn’t known he would need to provide a blood sample, and he felt cornered.
    For a second I thought that the cornered was concerned, for a moment, I thought that at last, Snape was concerned, but you quickly crushed those hopes.
    Anyway, I love your ending line! Such a nice close for a tension packed chapter!
Title: Chapter 5 30 Nov 2017 1:56 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahem, well, as pleased I am with the current turn of unpleasant events, I can't help but say that I am getting particularly excited for what is to come in the distant future.
Title: Chapter 4 30 Nov 2017 1:48 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay, I'm calm now that I am back from my undignified bout of silent screaming.

    I wont tell you what I have planned for Severus if I ever get my hands on him, it would be simply too disturbing.

    Anyway, this was another angsty chapter!
Title: Chapter 3 30 Nov 2017 1:33 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, Snape, if you want one word from me to describe you, it would be cruel. Really? Can't you see that Harry is in denial? Also, the way you are acting, even if Merlin himself told Harry that you were his father, I don't think he would have wanted it to be true then!

    Amazing story! Hope it isn't abandoned like the many others I have read.
Title: Chapter 10 20 Feb 2013 6:23 pm
Reviewer: Lilyflower5 (Signed) [Report This]
    So when wil this be updated or finished
Title: Chapter 10 29 Sep 2011 9:22 pm
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    I love it! Can't wait for more! Please update soon! Also, I'm here on weekends to bounce ideas around if you need help getting ideas.

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