Awwww NOOOOO!!! You can't leave off here! Not when it gets interesting xD
Please continue!
| Title: Chapter 6
| 12 Jun 2013 4:22 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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great story. cant wait to find out what happens. :)
Awesome!!! Please update soon!!
This is really good so far! I'm definitely enjoying it!
Very nice story. Wow, what a cliffhanger! Hope to see more soon.
Author's Response: I'm sorry to say that I've neglected this story. But the next chapter is in the works and will be up soon! Thanks so much for the review!
| Title: Chapter 6
| 05 Jul 2009 7:43 pm
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| Reviewer: akusen (Anonymous)
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I 've just found out your fic,and I must admit I'm just keen on it!!! I'm french and I prefer reading english gardianship fics,because it is rather rare in french,and this one just makes me feel ..wow!! please update soon;I'm looking forward !
Author's Response: Thanks so much for such an encouraging review! That really makes me feel good and inspires me to write faster. You are extremely good at English if it isn't your first language! I am extremely envious, I took french lessons for... *counts on fingers* 5 years and I'm still not very good at it at all. I shall try to get the next chapter posted as fast as I can. Again, thank you so much!
Wow! This is exciting. I hope you write another chapter soon.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope to upload the next chapter on Saturday, now that I've finished school updates should be more frequent!
He's so dead.....
Author's Response: LOL! Totally! Next chapter should be up on Saturday, thanks for the review!
This last chapter somehow doesn't convince me very well, if you know what I mean. How on earth is he going to know where to fly if he went via floo and apparition? And why would he be so stupid as to go anyhow? I guess the girl didn't convince me much either...
Prior to this chapter I was really getting into your story. Now I'm honestly not sure I can suspend disbelief long enough. I am going to track in anyhow to see where you are going with this...
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I appreciate hearing your opinion on things. I wasn't too sure about the latest plot line either, to tell you the truth, I just wanted my fic to be a bit different and not follow the exact same pattern as all the others; perhaps that will be my failing. Don't worry about him knowing where to fly though, he won't. Hopefully the extra information and his problems next chapter will help to convince you more. I really do hope you continue with my story, even if this latest plot line doesn't interest you, it will be over in a couple of chapters and maybe you could pick it up from there? Thanks for the constructive crit!
| Title: Chapter 6
| 18 Apr 2009 7:26 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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Just found your story and love it. Can't wait for the next update. At first I thought the girl might have been Hermione, but now I can't wait to read what happens.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you are enjoying my story, at first the girl was going to be a canon character but I couldn't really think of someone who fitted. The next chapter will be out soon!
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