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Title: Chapter 4 30 Sep 2008 2:22 am
Reviewer: Nyx the Panther (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Please please please please update soon! Hm...I wonder what rules little Harry is going to break.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm so glad you liked it! I will update very very soon, especially as I left such a mean cliffie. Ahhh, the rules! My lips are sealed!
Title: Chapter 4 30 Sep 2008 2:12 am
Reviewer: Muggle49 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor Harry,never seems to get a break. Thanks for sharing with us

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Poor Harry indeedy. He never does get much of a break, I often think that. Thank you for such lovely feedback!
Title: Chapter 4 29 Sep 2008 10:36 pm
Reviewer: Lisa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oooh! cliff hanger! Fantastic chapter, I was so excited to see an update and read this chapter insanely fast haha. Poor Harry..
    Please update as soon as you can!

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yup! One cliffhanger! Because I am an incredibly mean author! LOL! I'm so glad you liked it! I seem to be addicted to exclamation marks lol! I hope to update v v v v soon, thanks again for the review! It made me so happy!
Title: Chapter 4 29 Sep 2008 10:01 pm
Reviewer: Cicci Green (Signed) [Report This]
    I like it!
    But i think that it's maybe a little too fast-paced, and some of the dialouge feels a little awkward.
    I was just wondering, when Snape's going over the schedule he says that Harry should be in bed by eight, and that lunch is served at 12 and tea at six. but what about dinner? :P

    Please update soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it! And thanks for the constructive critism, it helps me write better. Hmmm, everyone calls meals different things it gets so confusing lol. Breakfast is the morning meal, right? then Lunch is the midday meal which some people call dinner and then tea is the evening meal which some people also call dinner. LOL, wouldnt it be soooooo much easier if people all called them the same thing? I always get confused when I hear people talking about dinner lol. I never know whether they are talking about a midday meal or an evening meal! Anyway I hope to update soon, thanks again!
Title: Chapter 4 29 Sep 2008 9:43 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    That sounds ominous--Harry's going to break "three" rules; I wonder what they could be?

    Bet at 8? Eeks! At 13!

    Well, at least he'll be able to sleep in his nice soft bed!

    So, now you have just got to update quickly--because you have piqued my curiousity. What mischief will Harry be getting into? o)

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! LOL, it will become clear in the next chapter. *spooky music* LOL! I hope to post it soon though so I don't keep you waiting too long. I really love writing this fic and I love everyone's kind words nearly as much! Thanks again!
Title: Chapter 4 29 Sep 2008 9:27 pm
Reviewer: kapi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    excellent chapter

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm so glad you liked it! I always feel nervous when posting a chapter and so the first few reviews are eagerly anticipated. I feel better now! Thanks again!
Title: Chapter 4 29 Sep 2008 9:14 pm
Reviewer: Ash (Signed) [Report This]
    Here comes the cry of all disgruntled readers out there, that quite a few authors know well - you can't stop there! And like that too!

    Am really enjoying the fic, loved the chapter as this was completely Severus, with a tad of kindness peeking through here and there, but just enough. We are still in the early days, so I am looking forward to seeing where you'll take this! Oh and I love poor Harry here, up and down, up and down, in his anxieties over what will happen.

    Thank you!

    Author's Response: LOL! I'm so mean, aren't I? I will update soon though, I'm so glad you are enjoying the fic! I write for my own enjoyment but I post for everyone else's. I have a clear idea where this fic is going and I really hope you continue to like it. Thanks for the great review!
Title: Chapter 3 28 Sep 2008 8:22 pm
Reviewer: ObsessiveaboutSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    oooooooooooooooo..........

    I'm so hooked!! Please continue

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm so glad I hooked you, when I think of the stories I feel that way about I'm pretty bowled over by the fact that some people feel that way about my story. When they tell me that it makes me so happy! I could just sing right now, only I wont because I treaure my mirror too much. I hope to update soon, thanks again!
Title: Chapter 2 28 Sep 2008 8:12 pm
Reviewer: ObsessiveaboutSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww...that was nice...in a Snape-is-a-mean-git kind of way. Hope you continue soon. I'll be waiting!!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it! Next chapter will be up asap. It may even be up tonight actually, I have to get a chapter written for another of my fics first though...

    Thanks again for the feedback!

Title: Chapter 1 25 Sep 2008 5:50 am
Reviewer: ObsessiveaboutSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow. This is good. I really like this. I hope you continue soon!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for reviewing! I'm so glad you liked it!!!! The next chapter should be up really soon! At least I hope so! I've been really busy lately but I should be able to get the next chapter up next week. I may even try and do it while I have a spare minute today....

     Thanks again!


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