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Title: Chapter 2 13 Sep 2008 10:27 pm
Reviewer: Sasulia (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, fantastic beginning to a promising story. I find this very interesting, well written, and full of good ideas. Very much looking forward to more. Definately a 10.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! You made me blush! I'm really glad you liked it and thought it was promising! The lovely things you said will stay with me forever. I really appreciate the rating too, I have just updated and I hope you like that chapter as much. Thanks again, I really do appreciate it.
Title: Chapter 2 13 Sep 2008 11:26 am
Reviewer: Muggle49 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Interesting beginning, seems to be simmering up to a full boil (smile) Thanks for sharing

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it! LOL, its boiling just like polyjuice potion! I have just updated and I hope you like the next chapter too. Thanks again!
Title: Chapter 2 11 Sep 2008 7:47 am
Reviewer: IT (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I LIKE IT
    UPDATE IT
    THANKS
    IT

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! LOL, I love how clever your review was IT! Hehe! Hilarious! I'm so glad you liked it! I have just updated and I hope you like this chapter as much. Thanks again for making me smile with your kind words.
Title: Chapter 2 09 Sep 2008 5:38 pm
Reviewer: Marion (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well, what do you know, Harry-me-boy, if you behave civilised, people will treat you like a civilised being in return. Who would've guessed! *sarcasm*
    Being civilised includes: coming on time for appointments, be grateful that somebody will put up with you for the whole summer even when he has no obligation or wish to do so, be grateful that you actually have a room to sleep in instead of a cupboard, not complaining about the colourscheme or the taste in decoration of your host, not complaining about your host at all, displaying basic tablemanners, not giving cheek, rude answers or insolent looks but instead be polite (a foreign concept to some, I know)

    I know, Harry-me-boy, that you've been raised in a figurative barn, and that you can't really be blamed for braying like a donkey, but I'm just warning you that if you are rude, surly, insolent and whiny about such idiotic things as colourschemes, you will sound like a spoilt, arrogant twerp. If you sound like an spoilt, arrogant twerp, you will be treated as a spoilt, arrogant twerp. No use then getting angry for your host to think you spoilt and arrogant. If you want to be treated and thought of as a nice, civil boy, oh, I dunno, ACT LIKE ONE!!!

    (and yes, that goes for the 'first potions lesson as well'. Read that chapter again and you'll see that the whole of the class is listening intently to teacher Snape's speech about 'bottling fame'etc, except for twerp Harry and sidekick twerp Ron Weasley who "raised their eyebrows at each other". In other words, when the teacher is speaking, these two boys pull 'who's this idiot' faces at each other. No wonder the teacher comes down at him like a ton of bricks. I would.)

    This rant has been brought to you by Marion, who is constantly annoyed by Potter fan's insistance that nasty-bad Snape is 'constantly picking' at poor widdle Harrikins who never did anything to deserve it, oh no, and who somehow think that Harry being rude, disobedient and dishonest is perfectly okay because he's 'just a chiiiild' but that Snape has to apologise or even admit to 'being so wrong about Harry being spoilt and arrogant' because 'he's the adult, he should know better'. Argh!

    Sorry, this rant was not aimed at you, dear author. Harry Potter just has this effect on me. I loved how Harry had the epiphany that displaying good manners gets a civilised response at the end of this chapter. By just letting the boy realise this, you have deserved a ten star rating. Hurrah!

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I really appreciate the rating (hurrah!) and your words of wisdom. What you are saying is completely true, Harry just has to realise it. Over the next few chapters he will realise it more and more. Of course he will stay have points were he will be disobedient and rude because if he didnt, lets face it, he wouldnt be Harry. Thanks again for the feedback, I really appreciate it.
Title: Chapter 2 08 Sep 2008 11:54 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like the fic. It's promising. I wonder what Snape plans for Harry.
    Little-sun

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you like it so far! I hope to get the next chapter out tonight, I hope you like that too. I want it to continue to be promising. Snape's plans? Oh he has a few, actually a lot more than a few lol. I hope you enjoy the rest of the fic! Thanks again!
Title: Chapter 1 08 Sep 2008 11:46 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I cannot believe Snape let them talk during his class :-O
    I like the fic, I especially like the way you made Dumbledore. I honestly don't know if you plan him to be senile, naive or malevolent.
    Little-sun

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for reviewing! I think Snape was too busy seething over the fact that he would actually have to take Harry home with him to want to speak to him. He saw it as Harrys fault and he had absolutely no desire to speak to him (even if technically he would shout at him and not speak lol). I'm so glad you like this fic, it makes me feel really happy everytime someone says that. I have always seen Dumbledore as rather crackers and totally naive and so that is how I portrayed him, I'm glad you liked it! Thanks again!

Title: Chapter 2 08 Sep 2008 10:47 pm
Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great start!

    Haha, Snape is such a jerk. I might even say—an idiot? :D Well, no he isn't, not really. He's not stupid, just insufferable (but oh-so-fun to read and write about!). Poor Harry.

    Anyway, really enjoying this so far! Can't wait for more.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm so glad you liked the start! Snape is very aggravating, but I love writing about him! The fun I can have with it! I'm glad you are enjoying this! I write for my enjoyment but I post for everyone else's. I hope to update again tonight. Thanks again!
Title: Chapter 2 08 Sep 2008 8:50 pm
Reviewer: ReginaCaeli (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well,I think Harry held his temper rather well in this chapter.Please write more ASAP.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Harry did hold his temper quite well, the question is can he continue the same way? I hope to post the next chapter later today, if not it will be tomorrow. I hope to update every week but it might end up being every two weeks because of school etc. *sigh* I wish I could spend my whole day writing, that would be bliss! Thanks again!
Title: Chapter 1 08 Sep 2008 8:44 pm
Reviewer: ReginaCaeli (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yep,Dumbledore's barmy,(giggle)but it makes a great plot.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Dumbledore is a little crackers, but a loveable character nevertheless. I'm glad you like my fic! I hope to update later today and I hope you like the next chapter as much. Updates should be fairly frequent, once a week would be nice but it depends on school. Thanks again!
Title: Chapter 2 08 Sep 2008 7:56 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice start. Poor Harry, having to go to bed at 7! But at least he'll be treated humanely with Snape (with a few snide comments thrown in here and there)!

    Update soon, I want to see if they're gonna kill each other, or learn to get along.....eventually! ;)

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you liked the start. Poor poor poor Harry, but its better than the Dursleys! I hope to update later today but if not it will be tomorrow. School has started back up and apparently they want to keep my nose to the grindstone. I really appreciate the feedback, everytime I get a new nice review it makes me smile! Thanks again!

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