| Title: Chapter 9
| 09 Mar 2009 2:25 am
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| Reviewer: DazzlingD (Anonymous)
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So glad to see an update. I just love this story. I eagerly await another chapeter.
| Title: Chapter 8
| 19 Jan 2009 11:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Inu Chan (Anonymous)
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??? What the heck is going on with Draco? I am really interested to find out what's happening next. And how will everone else (esp. Dumbledore...heh heh heh...) react to Snape's guardianship/adoption of Harry?
im very very confused about the whole Draco thing, it seems to be moving a little too fast with very few explanations, i would suggest trying to tie the ends up before starting with a new part to the story : )
| Title: Chapter 8
| 06 Jan 2009 5:27 am
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| Reviewer: Taryn (Anonymous)
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AUGH YOU'RE BRILLIANT.
see, I'm reviewing.
I just found this fic, and I have no idea how long ago you updated..but...but...DO IT AGAIN SOON.
although there's a bunch of minor spelling mistakes and whatnot.
| Title: Chapter 8
| 04 Jan 2009 1:24 pm
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| Reviewer: shan (Anonymous)
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great story! hope to read more soon! although... what happened at the end?!?!?
Author's Response: WOOT!!! YOU ARE THE ONE HUNDREDTH REVIEWER!!!! You get three chocolate frogs, an box of Bertie Bott's Every Flavor Beans, a hug from Severus, double hug from Harry and Draco, and a lifetime supply of butterbeer. Thanks so much for the review!!!!!! And as for the end, Draco had a meltdown, is all.......
| Title: Chapter 8
| 04 Jan 2009 1:59 am
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| Reviewer: le skrewt (Anonymous)
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Wow, Draco sort of lost the plot toward the end of this chapter when he started to rant about vampire butterflies (WTF), but the end result was pretty hilarious anyway :) I like Draco's mad plan to hold his godfather at wandpoint, and Severus's reaction (calling him Dragon, that is so Sev!) Poor Sev,both Draco and Harry really need him right now and I can tell the beginning of next chapter is going to be sooo confusing. I usually hate it when authors add Draco to a good Sev and Harry storry, but so far this is going great and I'm looking forward to seeing them get it all sorted out. HOpe that Harry stays Sev's prime focus though, Harry really needs someone just for him!
Last few chapters have been great; this is one of my favorite Sev/Harry stories. I really like your Snape and Harry. Your Snape is a nice balance of snark & caring and you really make the seemingly contradictory character traits work together with that inner voice of his. Harry is perfect, acting like an abused child (unlike JKR's weirdly unaffected Harry) but not completely spineless and weepy, as he's so often portrayed, eg in Rakina's fics. I like that it was his idea to come forward to Snape and he is taking initiative with other things like Winky and otherwise acting appropriately feisty and independent, even as he seeks Snape's approval and love.
Author's Response: I WEEP!!!! *sniff* OMG I just have to tell you, that was the SWEETEST review I have ever received. THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!! It means so much to me that you think my interpretation of the charcters are so good. *bawls* I COULD HUG YOU!!!! I so hope I can keep you interested and approving. And, lol, the next chapter will probably be a mess, yea! Thanks again!!!!
Ok. That was weird. But I love it! :D And, yes, I think Harry is acting the right age! At first he seemed slightly younger in you descriptions of him, but he acts like a 15 yr old. Peter Pan was so cool...
Author's Response: ....:D yes it was. I'm so glad you liked it. I thought it was so silly. I'll try to keep Harry at the right age...
Wow... that is such a weird concept...but..I think I like it! And merlin was funny. (: How come Dumbledore's 200 years old? oh, btw, I really like the skin legilimens thing!
Hi! Just thought I'd review this one (rather than every chapter). I love this story! I especially like how Harry can move stuff. The way you described Snape when the ice water appeared in his hand was marvelous! I like the evil!dumbledore too. Bit weird though - I'm wondering whats going on!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review!!! I'm glad you liked this chapter. I hope you consider reviewing a few more chapters, thoughh, even if you don't do every one. REVIEWS MAKE ME HAPPY!!! I'm having so much fun writing Severus, I'm glad you enjoy him too. ANd Dumbledore isn't exactly evil.......but no one will really understand his motivations till later. I hope to hear from you soon!!
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