Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 2 26 Sep 2008 3:16 am
Reviewer: kyzhart (Signed) [Report This]
    In regards to your response to my review - I think Sev has chosen. His super id hasn't caught up with his ego. In otherwords his mind hasn't caught up with his heart. That's why his behavior is see-sawing

    Author's Response: Well, yes, thats the reason, but he's gonna figure all that out next chapter, promise.
Title: Chapter 2 25 Sep 2008 9:10 am
Reviewer: kyzhart (Signed) [Report This]
    Quite intriging. I love how Sev is torn between love and hate.

    Author's Response: Thanks you!! I'm glad you liked it, but...maybe...I should have him make a decision soon....?
Title: Chapter 2 25 Sep 2008 6:15 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really enjoying your story, though I feel so sorry for poor Harry. Hopefully things will begin to look up for him now. Looking forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Things are looking up!!!! Of course. We couldn't keep it all sad and dreary, could we? I'll have it up as soon as possible!! Thanks!
Title: Chapter 2 25 Sep 2008 5:39 am
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting! You're right, you are essentially starting where many other fics end up. Really want to see where you mean to take this.

    Author's Response: Yay!! Thanks so much! I hope to keep you interested. I'll have another up in two days, max!
Title: Chapter 2 25 Sep 2008 3:26 am
Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well, you hav me a bit confused about what really went on in the train compartment. Did everything heal because of the potions or did Harry apply the glamours again in his sleep? Other than that, this was quite enjoyable again! I especially loved the line about "the Cruciatus Curse' second cousin three times removed" - that's a really, really nice one!!!!

    And again - I agree: Harry and Ginny, that's just too much of a resemblance to James and Lilly, and apart from that, the books do not manage to develope Ginny's character enough to make her a worthy partner to Harry. She is introduced more as a fan to the boy-who-lived than someone who sees him as a person in his own right. She just doesn't make sense as his girlfriend/wife! And I don't mean this as some sort of Ginny-bashing, because that's not my point, I just think that Rowling didn't get her character very well through! Something that's true for some of the other characters as well (like Snape) - but, on the other hand, that might just be one of the reasons, so much fanfiction is getting written! So I wont complain...

    Author's Response:

    Thansk so much! I'm so glad you liked it. And I completely agree with you on the elaboration of Giny's character. I felt like at least after Chamber of Secrets Ginny would have been more visible in the books, after all, her brother's best frined had just saved her life.... But, I get to change the way things happened a bit in my own little version of it, so no more complaining.

    And as for the healing......You'll just have to wait for the next chapter to find out, and yes everthing did happen in the train compartment. Harry used accidental magic to preform reverse Legimency on Severus, though he doesn't realize it till later.

     

    And, next chapter, DUMBLEDORE!!!! I'm so excited to try him out. In the other stories I've written I think he's pretty canon, but I could be wrong.

     

    I hope to keep you interested till the very very end. Thanks again!!!

     

Title: Chapter 2 25 Sep 2008 1:16 am
Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    loved keep writing very good snape is a little ooc but i think he did not always need to be a jerk, but that was how he hid being a death eater

    Author's Response:

    Thakn you!

    I thought he needed a softer side to. Not suddenly turn into Molly Weasley, mind you, just act a bit more human.....but I'll try to keep him as close to canon as possible. 

Title: Chapter 2 24 Sep 2008 7:58 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm sure that Snape's perceptions of Harry have been drastically altered.

    I do hope that you have some revenge against the Dursleys planned! ;)

    Update soon, I am anxious to see what goodies you have in store for us!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, yes, if only that he doesn't believe he's a spoiled prince anymore. Because he doesn't hate him, really, and was even worried about the poor child. But yes, Sever has some major thinking and apologizing to do.....

    And but of course. No Severus-adopts-Harry fanfic is complete without a Snape-meets-Dursleys scene. Just sit tight and follow me, dearie, and I'll show you.

    I'll try my very very best to have a new chapter up in at least the next few days.

    Thanks again!! 

Title: Chapter 2 24 Sep 2008 7:41 pm
Reviewer: Brandy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yay another chapter! Kudos on it, I don't think it's too fast I think the scene is very appropriate for the story. Can't wait to read more!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks you! Thank you! Thank you! You don't know how good it feels to have someone say that......unless of course you're a writer too.....

     

    I'll try not to keep you waiting too long!! 

Title: Chapter 2 24 Sep 2008 7:24 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, great set up and i liked the emotions in this chapter. Poor Harry, but I'm so glad that he has someone to look out for him now.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much!!

    yes yes, Harry has a spy as his new Guardian, and so its a good thing he won't be off snogging any girls anytime soon, right? 

    Thanks for the status change!!! Beleive it or not, its a great incentive to post quicker. :D

    I hope I keep you interested till I'm done! Thanks again! 

Title: Chapter 1 24 Sep 2008 3:45 am
Reviewer: Nyx the Panther (Anonymous) [Report This]
    NICE! Please update soon! :)

    Author's Response: Thanks you so much!! And I will. I'll submit the next chapter tomorrow, and hopefully it'll be validated soon....

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