Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 1 23 Sep 2008 8:02 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice. After your warnings, I thought that Snape would be Mother of the Year, yet you have managed to keep a nice balance of humanity and Snarkiness; with a dash of humour to boot!

    Nicely done; I can't wait for the next update!

    Author's Response: :D Lol. I think if I suddenly made him all mushy I wouldn't want to write his character anymore.... I'm glad you liked it. And I thought he needed a bit of humour, don't you? I'll post tomorrow, and hopefully you'll be able to read soon after.
Title: Chapter 1 23 Sep 2008 7:03 pm
Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    A promising start! I'm looking forward to the next chapter and hope it'll be up soon!
    Nice how you had Harry envy Ron - I always thought that Ron was an idiot for begrudging Harry his fame, while he had a nice family and people looking out for him! He never managed to really understand what Harry's life was like, he only saw the attention he got and never the price he had to pay for it - and honestly, more than half of the attention was negative and hatefull! So I'm looking forward to your version! Also the relationship between Ron and Hermione must have been hard on Harry (unlike in the books) because it made the trio into a duo with a third wheel, and the halfhearted attempt of including Ginny doesn't really function for me! I'm curious to see where your story's going!

    Author's Response: YAY!!!! I hoped someone would pick up on that. In the books it really made no sense to me, but then again, thay are teenage boys.....maybe they speak a different language, because my brothers understand perfectly. And yes, though I loved the parralels between Harry and Ginny and James and Lily, i thought it was a bit much, and at the same time, not enough, if that makes sense. I'm curious to see where this is going too, believe me. But Harry'll get by, with a little help from his Snape....and a few others.....>D
Title: Chapter 1 23 Sep 2008 11:05 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Poor Harry!
    Did Vernon burn everything or just his books? I hope Hedwig is alright.

    Author's Response: :) You'll have to read and see....I promise not to keep you waiting very long.
Title: Chapter 1 23 Sep 2008 9:12 am
Reviewer: ReginaCaeli (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great begining.I can hardly wait to see how this developes.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 1 23 Sep 2008 8:30 am
Reviewer: Brandy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh wow I really like this so far! This is different than the usual, yet is still feels cannon. Please do continue!!! (Am I the 1st? review?)

    Author's Response: Yup, you are. And thanks so much!! I'm glad you like it. I'll post another chapter tomorrow, because I just finished writing it, and then it'll only have to be validated. Thanks again!

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