I enjoyed your ending. It felt like just the right way to end your story.
I’m glad that Harry apologized sincerely, and that Severus showed a deeper understanding and in a way compassion.
I appreciated their conversation, and especially the seeds of trust that Dumbledore plants.
I appreciate Hermione’s resolve in wanting to help Harry beyond what Snape has suggested, He clearly needs it!
I was initially thinking veritaserum too! It was nice seeing Harry calm down from his own perspective.
Well there’s the silver lining in all this - besides building rapport with Snape, Harry gets to focus on being a better captain. Hey, we’ll take it!
The salve part was funny from Harry’s perspective, though the caning so painful to read about.
Nice conversation between Dumbledore and Harry, thank you.
Oh no, this is definitely darker from Harry’s perspective. I feel sad for him.
Funny author note! Thanks for the nice chapter.
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