That was very well written. Now I'm remembering this story, and I'm so glad that you've decided to write it agian. It has a lot of potential.
I'm dying to find out more about the charms that Lily's placed on Harry, and how it involves Snape.
Title: Chapter 3 - Defence
| 21 Dec 2008 7:31 am
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Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Wow! What a fantastic start to a story! And the cliffhanger is just incredible! I can't wiat to red more! Really good job on the buildup and giving just enough hints. Draco was done very well, as were all the characters. They were all very much in character. Thanks for posting this! I hope that you are able to continue it.
Very interesting, I hope Snape figures it out and Malfoy doesn't blab the note to the whole school.
So far so good. I can't wait to see what happens next. does Draco tell?
Title: Chapter 3 - Defence
| 18 Nov 2008 12:36 am
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Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous)
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Wow! This is a novel idea.
Can't wait for more.
Title: Chapter 3 - Defence
| 18 Nov 2008 12:31 am
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Reviewer: severusphoenix (Anonymous)
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I always like Severus mentors Harry stories. Update soon.
So how long is Snape going to be difficult (and a git) until he comes around?
Title: Chapter 3 - Defence
| 17 Nov 2008 10:56 am
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Reviewer: gin (Anonymous)
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snape heard pomfrey and harry' talk but still he wants harry read a note in class.snape is very cruel.really what lily happen.poor boy and draco.i dont like him in your story too.
Just what has Lilly done? I Can't wait to find out!
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