Title: Chapter 4 - Secrets
| 27 Dec 2008 11:27 am
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Reviewer: JLAJ (Anonymous)
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I am! Or was, before I ran out of chapters! :P
More, please?
Title: Chapter 4 - Secrets
| 27 Dec 2008 10:31 am
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Reviewer: Shauna (Anonymous)
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Yep, someone is reading. And I like it very much. Keep up the good work!
Title: Chapter 4 - Secrets
| 27 Dec 2008 10:22 am
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Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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I am! It's great so far! Good job with both Harry and Snape being in character. :)
Title: Chapter 4 - Secrets
| 27 Dec 2008 9:21 am
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Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous)
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Great chapter! Looking forward to more!
Title: Chapter 3 - Defence
| 21 Dec 2008 7:31 am
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Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Wow! What a fantastic start to a story! And the cliffhanger is just incredible! I can't wiat to red more! Really good job on the buildup and giving just enough hints. Draco was done very well, as were all the characters. They were all very much in character. Thanks for posting this! I hope that you are able to continue it.
Title: Chapter 2 - Sticks and Stones
| 21 Dec 2008 7:26 am
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Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Wow, Harry's intense anger was scary. I guess that is what would have happened in the books if Dumbledore was around in book 5. Good chapter!
Title: Chapter 1 - Coming Home
| 21 Dec 2008 7:24 am
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Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Great first chapter! Poor Harry. That was a very interesting situation... having Snape there mixing potions and witnessing Harry's conversation with Madame Pomfrey. Well done.
Very interesting, I hope Snape figures it out and Malfoy doesn't blab the note to the whole school.
So far so good. I can't wait to see what happens next. does Draco tell?
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