| Title: Chapter 3 - Defence
| 18 Nov 2008 12:36 am
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| Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous)
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Wow! This is a novel idea.
Can't wait for more.
| Title: Chapter 3 - Defence
| 18 Nov 2008 12:31 am
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| Reviewer: severusphoenix (Anonymous)
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I always like Severus mentors Harry stories. Update soon.
So how long is Snape going to be difficult (and a git) until he comes around?
| Title: Chapter 3 - Defence
| 17 Nov 2008 10:56 am
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| Reviewer: gin (Anonymous)
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snape heard pomfrey and harry' talk but still he wants harry read a note in class.snape is very cruel.really what lily happen.poor boy
and draco.i dont like him in your story too.
Just what has Lilly done? I Can't wait to find out!
| Title: Chapter 3 - Defence
| 17 Nov 2008 5:09 am
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| Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous)
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Wow! Great story! I just discovered it and really like it! Can't wait for more!
| Title: Chapter 3 - Defence
| 17 Nov 2008 3:03 am
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| Reviewer: kella (Anonymous)
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update this instance!
this chapter was brilliant!
I cant believe it!!
I'm soo hooked!
| Title: Chapter 2 - Sticks and Stones
| 21 Oct 2008 11:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous)
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A very promising start! I'm eager to learn how Dumbledore is going to defend his reasons for keeping Harry "safe" this time around!!! I hope he'll incur the wrath of Snape - and Poppy as well, and maybe Minerva too - for his upstanding conduct as both a teacher/headmaster and the leader of the "Light"... I hope you'll have him pay somehow!
It's too bad Harry didn't tell Dumbledore where to shove his insistence that he stay at the Dursleys for "his own protection"--ha! sending him back to be beaten to within an inch of his life is hardly protection, in my book, more like negligence!
This is a very god start, I like how you let Severus find out about Harry's home life without going to see the Dursleys or having been sent there by Albus, since that's been done to death already. And I'm curious to know why Harry's scar didn't hurt when he was by Severus.
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