I like Draco in this. Thanks for not making him so whiney! ;)
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| 07 Mar 2009 7:31 pm
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| Reviewer: FS (Anonymous)
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Ouch. Fours hours of cauldron cleaning!
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| 28 Oct 2008 9:49 am
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| Reviewer: Muggle49 (Anonymous)
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Still very interesting :)
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| 25 Oct 2008 11:36 am
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| Reviewer: alaniel (Anonymous)
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Hi,
I love your story, I always thought, that Harry can'T really be as stupid as he seems to be .... I absulutely loved the part about him inventing stuff in potions, and the way he gets on with Draco. Why does he call Hermione "Maya"? It's also great that you didn't make himi out to be invincible and superwizard but that he still has emotions and hard times with coming to terms with his past - no one could just put that behind them in the blink of an eye. Seems like Snape is in for a few surprises (great patronus by the way - what is the bird?)
Please update soon!!!!!!!
Interesting, I like patrick and I definitely like how hermione & harry are getting along. I also like the last paragraph, where Sev is starting to rethink his attitude about Harry.
Maybe you are making Harry too perfect? Perfect people are boring.
Nice catch with Pat, the way he is salivating over Hermione. Harry should voice his attraction out before she is lured away *smelling troubles and likes it* Mila
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