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Reviews For Reflections
Good chapter, tho!
I love this story, Snape making them clean up the popcorn the muggle way was too funny!
I also liked the fact that you didn't give us a laundry list of description telling us exactly what Harry looked like when the glamour came down. You told us everything we need to know with those last few lines: "...looked like Lily Potter, more that I ever have..." and "I look like Snape's son." I got shivers just reading that. I await your next chapter with bated breath.
Author's Response: vampluver, Thanks! And I'm writing chapter 5 right now. Should be up within the next week or so depending on my and my beta reader's schedules. So, hopefully fairly soon.
-purplemagik
I love your story, I always thought, that Harry can'T really be as stupid as he seems to be .... I absulutely loved the part about him inventing stuff in potions, and the way he gets on with Draco. Why does he call Hermione "Maya"? It's also great that you didn't make himi out to be invincible and superwizard but that he still has emotions and hard times with coming to terms with his past - no one could just put that behind them in the blink of an eye. Seems like Snape is in for a few surprises (great patronus by the way - what is the bird?) Please update soon!!!!!!!
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