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Title: New Images 28 Oct 2008 6:21 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting chapter, with an interesting development! One minor typo needs correcting, tho: Padma's sister spells her name a little differently: it's PARVATI.
    Good chapter, tho!
Title: New Images 28 Oct 2008 3:59 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful! must have more...more...MORE
Title: New Images 28 Oct 2008 3:59 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow!

    I love this story, Snape making them clean up the popcorn the muggle way was too funny!
Title: New Images 28 Oct 2008 3:48 am
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooh! What a revelation! I really like the relationship between Harry and Hermione as you have shown it. Actually, I never thought that Hermione and Ron could ever have a successful relationship. They are too different and each would try to change the other person to make them more like the other. It would be a match made in hell. But Harry and Hermione have a nicely balanced amount of similarities and differences. I think that their relationship would be successful.

    I also liked the fact that you didn't give us a laundry list of description telling us exactly what Harry looked like when the glamour came down. You told us everything we need to know with those last few lines: "...looked like Lily Potter, more that I ever have..." and "I look like Snape's son." I got shivers just reading that.

    I await your next chapter with bated breath.
Title: New Images 28 Oct 2008 2:23 am
Reviewer: ObsessiveaboutSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Muahahahahahahah!!!! I so love this story. Please tel me you'll be updating soon. I'd very much like to continue reading!!
Title: New Images 27 Oct 2008 11:47 pm
Reviewer: vampluver (Signed) [Report This]
    Don't just leave it there, keep it going, your working on the next chapter as i type aren't you??? I hope you are because this is not like other severitus'... and i mean that in a good way.
Title: New Images 27 Oct 2008 11:41 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    A wind phoenix! How cool! I loved the popcorn scene too and Severus's reaction to it, it was funny. And what happened between Lily and Severus to split them up? Will we ever find out?
Title: Seeing Past the Surface 26 Oct 2008 8:53 am
Reviewer: vampluver (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG You know its late at night but i saw this and just had to read it. Do you think its possible to update soon, i love it.

    Author's Response:

    vampluver, Thanks!  And I'm writing chapter 5 right now.  Should be up within the next week or so depending on my and my beta reader's schedules.  So, hopefully fairly soon.

     

     -purplemagik

Title: Unsuspected Depths 25 Oct 2008 11:36 am
Reviewer: alaniel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi,
    I love your story, I always thought, that Harry can'T really be as stupid as he seems to be .... I absulutely loved the part about him inventing stuff in potions, and the way he gets on with Draco. Why does he call Hermione "Maya"? It's also great that you didn't make himi out to be invincible and superwizard but that he still has emotions and hard times with coming to terms with his past - no one could just put that behind them in the blink of an eye. Seems like Snape is in for a few surprises (great patronus by the way - what is the bird?)
    Please update soon!!!!!!!
Title: Seeing Past the Surface 24 Oct 2008 9:16 pm
Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really enjoy your story. I liked how your have Harry a little more mature and smart.

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