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Title: Seeing Past the Surface 24 Oct 2008 1:25 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes, I know what you mean, LOL!

    So, here's mine. I liked the way you illustrated how useless Slughorn is when teaching potions, but does harry find the HBP potions book? I also liked the patronus spells, the panther was awesome and so was Sev's fox.

    Author's Response:

    Snapegirl, I'm glad tou like the story, and thank you for reviewing it.  Harry might get the book, but I'm not sure yet.  If you really want him to find it, or have any ideas about how he would get ahold of it or use it, let me know.  Thanks again!

     

    -purplemagik

Title: Unsuspected Depths 24 Oct 2008 1:17 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting, I like patrick and I definitely like how hermione & harry are getting along. I also like the last paragraph, where Sev is starting to rethink his attitude about Harry.
Title: New Year 24 Oct 2008 1:12 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    That's really funny, that last line! I like how Harry is starting to rethink his attitude about draco nad I liked the way all three of them interacted on the train. Good thing Ron wasn't there, he'd have caused a major scene. It looks like Draco and Harry have more in common than they thought. And I liked how Harry hid Draco from Pansy, ugh!
Title: Mirrors 24 Oct 2008 12:58 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked all the perspectives you put on each of the characters, especially hermione, Sev, & harry's. I especially liked how you portrayed Severus's hair, since I always thought that part was a mask. Even Albus was well done, reading on!
Title: Seeing Past the Surface 23 Oct 2008 11:10 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Fox would go better to Hermione than a panther, I think. But why Snape has got a fox? *wondering* Mila

    Author's Response:

    little-sun, Wow!  4 reviews!  Yes, I know Harry might seem a bit too perfect now, but he still has flaws and troubles, he's just more dedicated.  Patrick might :D be developing a crush, but for now Harry is clueless, and Hermione hasn't noticed, but it will become more obvious...  Snape is a fox because, well, oops! That would be giving it away!  You'll have to wait, but it will be addressed, I promise!  I'm not sure what's going to happen with Hermione's patronus later on, but right now it's still an otter.  And a high-five to another Harry/Hermione fan.  Thanks!

     

    -purplemagik

Title: Unsuspected Depths 23 Oct 2008 11:00 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Maybe you are making Harry too perfect? Perfect people are boring.
    Nice catch with Pat, the way he is salivating over Hermione. Harry should voice his attraction out before she is lured away *smelling troubles and likes it* Mila
Title: New Year 23 Oct 2008 10:50 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    "It was the best summer I've had in years." hahaha, that's splendid.
Title: Mirrors 23 Oct 2008 10:41 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, one more think - as an frowner (is that really a word?) over Ron/Hermione pairing, I appreciate the direction of Harry’s and Hermione’s attraction. I will be hoping... Mila
Title: Seeing Past the Surface 23 Oct 2008 6:53 pm
Reviewer: Kirsty (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Harry/Hermione ...at last
    no one does Harry/Hermione on here
    *grins and bounces up and down*
    Great start - Please update soon

    Author's Response:

    Kristy, I see my fellow Harry/Hermione fans are coming out of the woodwork :)  Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you like it.  I'll try to update soon.

     

    -purplemagik

Title: Seeing Past the Surface 23 Oct 2008 10:05 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting story! Just one question: You introduced Patrick to us, but who the heck is Maya? Thanks.

    Author's Response:

    Ah, thank you for catching me.  Maya is a weird nickname for Hermione, pronounced MY-a, but I forgot to put it in my author's notes or make it clear during the story.  Thank you!

     

    -purplemagik


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