Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 8 07 Jul 2015 8:32 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi
    I really like your story, but I would adise that you refrain from discussing politics in such an unsubtle manner...everyone has his/hers opininion and that is perfectly fine and good, but when I search for an escape in (fan)fiction I honestly do not want to think about politics...
Title: Chapter 11 27 Jun 2015 5:17 pm
Reviewer: Sev and Lily Forever (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Severus has more social skills than I do- I would have been one of the guests that Disapparated!
    Keep up the awesome writing.
Title: Chapter 6 27 Jun 2015 4:54 pm
Reviewer: Sev and Lily Forever (Anonymous) [Report This]
    'Cookie porn...' LOL!
Title: Chapter 29 14 Nov 2014 1:47 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Good for Harry. His essay turned out quite well and I'm sure that Severus and Lily were proud of him. That was a fun story and I enjoyed how everyone's relationships grew through the years.
Title: Chapter 29 12 Nov 2014 4:20 am
Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Signed) [Report This]
    Impresionante

    gracias por compartir una hermosa historia, realmente bella

    Author's Response: Thank you.  I am glad you liked it.
Title: Chapter 29 11 Nov 2014 8:53 pm
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story! I enjoyed watching Severus learn to be a husband and father.

    Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you liked it.
Title: Chapter 28 05 Nov 2014 7:59 am
Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Signed) [Report This]
    Julian Noel?

    Lindo nombre, sin duda

    un capĆ­tulo tierno, y sin duda me encanto la explicaciĆ³n del apellido,

    genial
Title: Chapter 28 05 Nov 2014 2:26 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    And the Snape family continues to grow. I liked Snape's discussion with Harry about names. Harry needed to hear that he would still be important to Severus regardless of the new baby. Snape's positive comments about James were nice to read, too. The end where Severus got a faceful was funny. Count on Sirius to have taped the whole thing.
Title: Chapter 27 30 Oct 2014 11:54 pm
Reviewer: hule (Signed) [Report This]
    So sad what happened to the cat and you wrote it perfectly. Our little cat had to go the same way, it was awful and I was lucky to be at the vet on my own. Never told the children what really happened there. One always feels so guilty. Thanks for the story.
Title: Chapter 27 21 Oct 2014 1:13 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Dang. That was gut wrenching. I've had cats all my life and taking them to the vet to have them put down is always agonizing. Even when you know it's for the best it hurts. It was especially sad that Harry had let the cat out and felt that it was his fault.

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, I know how you feel Bridge.  I cried when I wrote the chapter and again when I was double checking the proof reading. I was going for honest feeling here. 

    I've had cats all my life as well.  We had to put our first one down when I was just about 8.  She had cancer and was suffering.  This was after having one surgery too.  I couldn't go into the room.  It was too hard.  I sat in the car playing with a stuffed animal when they did it.  I hated talking about it for years.  It still bring a tear to my eye almost 20 years later. 

    Yeah, Harry is going to feel bad about it for a while.  At least he has people who will make sure to remind him whenever he does feel it was his fault, that it wasn't.


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