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Title: Chapter 18 31 Jul 2014 5:49 am
Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood (Signed) [Report This]
    Beautiful! I loved this chapter. My husband proposed on Christmas so I love when I see them. I would still be open to being a beta, but this one was great and didn't need any help. I can't wait for more! ~Jessi
Title: Chapter 18 29 Jul 2014 2:52 am
Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow!!!

    Se van a casar, wow!!! creo que lo que queda ahora es Severus asumiendo el papel de papá y no el de novio de tu mamá, wow!!!
Title: Chapter 18 28 Jul 2014 5:53 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww. A Christmas proposal. My husband proposed just before Christmas so I have a soft spot for that. It sounds like everyone (except Harry) was waiting for him to pop the question.
Title: Chapter 18 28 Jul 2014 5:34 am
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Sweet!
Title: Chapter 17 20 Jul 2014 11:54 pm
Reviewer: Jessi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi there! I am loving this story so much. It's very original and lovely. However, it's getting difficult to read because there are quite a few grammatical and sentence structure mistakes. I didn't want to come off as insulting but the past two chapters have not been up to par as the rest of this story. I may not have beta'd but if you need another person to look at your chapters I would be available. I can't wait for more!
Title: Chapter 17 20 Jul 2014 1:48 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad Severus told Lily a brief version of what happened at the hearing. I know that I was wondering. Having Snape read Sense and Sensibility to Lily was a funny idea. Can't have too much Rickman.
Title: Chapter 16 20 Jul 2014 1:38 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Severus did an impressive job with Lily's birthday. Something the three of them could enjoy. The park to tire out Harry followed by a romantic dinner for himself and Lily. The faculty will be impressed when they hear about it. One little comment. You wrote that Severus stocked down the halls. The word you want is stalked. Might just be a typo but thought I would mention it.
Title: Chapter 17 20 Jul 2014 12:50 am
Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow!!!

    yo no había pensado en el papel de espía de Severus,

    que emoción!!!!!!!!
Title: Chapter 16 18 Jul 2014 5:53 am
Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow!!

    Este fue un hermoso capítulo, como siempre me han enamorado los pequeños detalles que has puesto,

    como lo de Severus llevando a caballito a Harry, y lo del baño,

    la forma de Harry de saludar a Severus al llegar a casa, lo doméstico y dulce que suena todo,

    y por supuesto,

    no hay duda que la cena romántica y plan de cumpleaños es sencillamente precioso
Title: Chapter 15 05 Jun 2014 5:34 am
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great update and set up for the next chapter or two - looking forward to hearing about Snape at the Ministry, as well as the students' reactions when they find out who he dating.

    Author's Response:

    I love when you guys review.  You always make me think about scenes and things I never considered when I was writing.  I will have to go back and address some of these concerns in the future.  I think you have just given me the impetus to write several more chapters. 


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