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Title: Between 05 May 2021 12:56 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting. Hopefully, it caused James to reflect apologetically on his own behavior towards Snape as a student.
Title: Between 12 Dec 2011 1:58 am
Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Signed) [Report This]
    Well that was just plain weird!

    Author's Response: Gee, thanks
Title: Between 23 Oct 2009 7:22 am
Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed) [Report This]
    Whoa, another one with very interesting Snape/James interaction. It's fun to read, hope you keep it up.

    And. Irony. Yeah.

    -K

    Author's Response:

    I have been asserting very forcefully that I would not be continuing this, but in the last few weeks, I've been toying with a companion oneshot to this.  I'm glad everyone has liked this little AU as much as they have.

    I love irony.  I live for irony.

Title: Between 07 Dec 2008 8:40 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    this is really intriguing and very interesting. i like how james is having to confront an almost karma like retribution brought upon him though his son. the sins of the father right? i also like how this seems to be an annual conversation between snape and james. i would like to see more of this. james hving to have snape help him in confronting dumbledore? just really great characterizations and a brilliant new twist that i haven't read before.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, it was a lot of fun to write, but I don't intend to continue it.  That, I'm afraid would all have to be in your imagination.  Also, I didn't intend the conversation to be an annual event.  Snape just found the really perfect moment of revenge and used it.

Title: Between 30 Nov 2008 10:54 am
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Signed) [Report This]
    I would love to see some more stories form this universe - I really like the way you showed Harry, anger and frustration and a bit of terror too.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  I will not be writing any further stories in this universe, but I do have a "Harry is in Slytherin" novella in the works, in which Harry is decidedly not closer to any of the Slytherin students than in canon and doesn't get along well with his head of house, after I finish my current novel length fic.  I tried to keep Harry very much in character in this story, and even though he's in an awful position, I didn't want it to be pure angst.  So, he's angry, afraid, and embarrassed.  It was fun to write.

Title: Between 28 Nov 2008 4:39 am
Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww such a sad look at the way things could've been. Interesting to parallel Harry's experience with Snape's!

    Author's Response: I must say, we should all be glad I don't own Harry Potter.
Title: Between 27 Nov 2008 6:22 am
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Very well done. I like the way you had Thomas Finnegan and Longbottom reprising the roles of the Marauders, and the bit of the vial of Lily's blood in the urn with her ashes being the blood protection is absolutely inspired.

    I'm very glad you wrote this.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  I get worried when an idea grabs hold of me and refuses to let go that it isn't as exciting to everyone else as it is to me.  As to the blood in the urn, my eyes literally popped open at three in the morning when I realized I had to deal with the blood protection somehow since Harry wasn't living with the Dursleys.  I'm cheerfully macabre in the wee small hours.

Title: Between 26 Nov 2008 10:01 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, what a chilling look into another world! It's incredibly well-written. I love the insight into the other characters, and I feel so sorry for Harry.

    Good job!

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you liked it and I'm really glad you didn't try to get me to make it into a chapterfic.  Poor Harry indeed.  Mind, if it's any consolation, he gives as good as he gets.

Title: Between 26 Nov 2008 9:37 pm
Reviewer: Ella (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OMG
    can you please just add another chapter??
    come on?
    i mean seriously
    that CAN NOT BE THE END!
    that was a great great great one shot thoug
    there was just enough insight to understand what was happening to poor poor harry

    Author's Response:

    Wow, I'm really disappointing everyone.  This is the end.

    I'm glad you liked it.  I tried not to say too much, to keep it strong and poignant, and lengthening it would probably ruin it.

Title: Between 26 Nov 2008 2:57 am
Reviewer: katie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    this is amazing! please continue it!!!!

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you like it, and the overwhelming majority of reviewers seem to want me to continue it, but I have too many projects going, and this idea already had me write what it wanted me to write.  I don't intend to continue it.  Much of its strength, such as it is, comes from the fact that it is only a window into the alternate universe, and I think it would lose something if I continued it.

    I do have a chapterfic that I just started on my LJ account about what would have happened if Remus bit Snape in the Shrieking Shack if you're starved for more fic.


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