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Title: The Members of Magic (Part Two) 04 Nov 2006 8:04 am
Reviewer: Flyzonked (Anonymous) [Report This]

    I love that Harry's a Weasley! And Ron asking Harry for a hug was just adorable!

    The state of that kitchen sounds an awful lot like my own at the mo' *blush*

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Title: The Members of Magic (Part Two) 18 Oct 2006 2:53 am
Reviewer: Kristen (Anonymous) [Report This]

    I've been reading your fic for the last hour or so, and I have been enjoying it a lot. It is very well written. :)

    Something just occured to me though...in PoA, didn't Severus use Expelliarmus and catch Harry, Ron and Hermione's wands? It's not a big deal or anything, your story works well with this "situation" of Snape's. I was just wondering if this was going to be explained or if I should just ignore it and enjoy the story???

    Anyway, keep up the good work, you've made me smile today, and I had a MIDTERM!! Do you know how rare that is? Congrats, and cheers!

     

Title: The Members of Magic (Part Two) 01 Feb 2005 12:19 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Haha, wow! I LOVED having Harry part of the Weasley family, no matter how distant. When Ron asked for a hug and the rest of the family joined in.. well that was so sweet! I loved the dinner mess, that was a riot! :) And now Snape's magic is faulty? Dun dun dun dun. I think that your Tonks is okay as a outside character, she's kind of fun. You could work a little bit on your execution though.. theres just something, I can't really explain but it's like... I'm reading and something jars me from the story. I think it might be the pace? Skipping through only the most entertaining and amusing scenes perhaps. Well anyways, great chapter! :D

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