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Reviews For Harry Potter and the Phoenix's Flight
ooh, I loved the sirens and the gates crahing down and everything! exciting!
I apologize for doubting you!!! I obviously misunderstood with the Alrister/Alistair thingy. I assumed, and I shouldn't have done that. I'm sorry. Forgive a humble reader? I hope so. I loved the defenses of the school, by the way! Kristen
Also, this is just something I've been noticing but was really apearent this chapter: you have a weird mix between British stuff and American stuff, especially when you write about the foods. You should probably look into fixing that as it is detracting from your story. :) Other than that, wonderful real chapter. |
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