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Title: A Warm Welcome 04 Nov 2006 6:53 pm
Reviewer: Flyzonked (Anonymous) [Report This]

    ooh, I loved the sirens and the gates crahing down and everything! exciting!

Title: A Warm Welcome 18 Oct 2006 9:55 pm
Reviewer: Kristen (Anonymous) [Report This]

    I apologize for doubting you!!! I obviously misunderstood with the Alrister/Alistair thingy. I assumed, and I shouldn't have done that. I'm sorry. Forgive a humble reader? I hope so.

    I loved the defenses of the school, by the way!

    Kristen

Title: A Warm Welcome 01 Feb 2005 1:30 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter. :) Just some comments though: Ron seems a little over done. I think that this is just an aspect of his new teenager personality coming out, being important from going to Order Meetings, being Harry's best friend and knowing Dumbledore outside of school, it's an excuse as to why he is so "friendly" or rude during the feast. But it was a little over done.

    Also, this is just something I've been noticing but was really apearent this chapter: you have a weird mix between British stuff and American stuff, especially when you write about the foods. You should probably look into fixing that as it is detracting from your story. :) Other than that, wonderful real chapter.

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