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Title: Mine 09 Jul 2023 10:09 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, that was intense. I’m curious how Severus would have raised him, how supportive of a father he would have been, and how Harry would then react to learning the truth.
Title: Mine 20 Nov 2016 9:41 pm
Reviewer: Reader629 (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this plot so much! It has so many possibilities for the future! I say make a continuation where Harry is gets his Hogwarts letter addressed to him, finds out Lily and James are his parents, goes through angst but still wants to be with Sev.
Title: Mine 20 May 2013 1:33 am
Reviewer: JulieRickman (Signed) [Report This]
    interesante, siguela
Title: Mine 30 Aug 2009 4:21 am
Reviewer: Selchie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Please continue this: it's a facinating scenario and I'd love to see how Harry (if he is even called Harry) grows up with a mentally unstable Snape.

    I love your writing style: I've just finished "Suffering" and I really enjoyed both your interpretation of the characters and the plot line. I also liked your writing style, dribbling little snippets of information, allowing the picture of the past to form- a masterfully written fic.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for reading my fics, Selchie!  I still am considering a continuation of this and I have a vague idea of what I want to happen; it'll take a lot of planning though to get it off the ground, but hopefully I can get it going sometime.  I do have a couple other new fics on there way, so keep your eyes open for those because I think you'll enjoy them.

    I'm especially glad you read Suffering because I spent a lot of time working on it and I consider it to be one of the best fics I've ever written.  It was very fun planning the slow plot build-up and giving personalities to characters who didn't have them already established.  Thank you so much for your wonderful compliments; they made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside.  Many thanks!

    -P.G. 

Title: Mine 28 May 2009 1:55 am
Reviewer: LoudlySilent (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I hope that you can continue it one day, and as evil as it is, I hope Snape raises him as his own

    Author's Response:

    I would like to continue it sometime, but right now I have tons of other on-going fanfiction projects to keep me busy.  I do think it would be fun to write about Snape trying to raise him though.  Thanks for reading!

    -P.G. 

Title: Mine 28 Dec 2008 5:00 am
Reviewer: strangergirl86 (Signed) [Report This]
    I truly enjoyed reading this story. Snape's thoughts seem so realistic. I hope you get a good idea for a continuation, because I believe you'd write a really great story. Thanks for sharing.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  I'm glad you liked it.  I wanted Snape to come across as terribly jealous; I'm glad you think I did him justice.  I've been thinking about this fic for the past few days and I think I do have an idea of where I want to go with it, but I need to finish another fic before I work on this.  Thanks for your support!

    -P.G. 

Title: Mine 27 Dec 2008 6:29 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow that was very creepy and yet I think that Severus will love Harry, although what will happen once Lily and James discover he is missing? And you could also consider that if he's with Snape, he won't be there the night Voldemort comes to kill the Potters. You could have a whole alternative storyline. Good one-shot and keep writing!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks--I was going for creepy!  I wanted it to be disturbing that Sev could take Harry so easily.  I think Sev would grow to love Harry too, though his parents would be greatly pained by their loss.  Quite true that Harry Potter may not have his famous scar if I continue this, which I probably will.  Once I'm finished with the project I'm currently working on, I'll probably get back to this.  Thanks again for your support!

     

    -P.G. 

Title: Mine 25 Dec 2008 7:36 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh that is so beautiful! What about if he reluctantly gives Harry back to Lily, but then when Lily and James dies, Harry is given back to Snape to raise as his guardian, or better yet, when he tries to give the baby back to Lily, or later when she dies, he finds out that when he had thought that "He should have been mine," Harry really WAS Severus' son, all along!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for reading; I'm glad you liked it.  You have some interesting ideas--I hadn't really thought about having him give the boy back willingly.  It would be interesting if he had been Snape's son all along.  Thanks for the ideas--I will consider them for the fic.

    -P.G. 

Title: Mine 25 Dec 2008 7:03 pm
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very dark fic, P.G. And very well written. I would be interested to see how you would continue with this. I'm glad you decided to post here. Welcome to P&S!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  I'm glad you liked it.  I probably will continue this when I get some time and a better idea of what I want to do.

    -P.G. 


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