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Title: Part Two 09 Apr 2009 5:40 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, you naughty girl! You have made us wait so long for an update to this amazing story. I'd forgotten about it, and that's a tragedy because it is so well written and so unique.

    I can't wait for more, and I hope that you definitely making it a lot longer than just a couple of chapters!

    I can't wait for Harry to find out one day that Severus is his father. I'm trying to keep up with the time line, and from what I can gather, Lily travels back and forth through time in an effort to defeat Voldie? Is that correct? Sorry, if I'm a little confused, but I absolutely love this story, so you'd better continue...hear me young lady? LOL! :)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for reading Pandora, I'm glad you enjoyed it.  It has been entirely too long, hasn't it?  Hopefully I'll be much quicker with the next installment.  I'm very excited about when Harry finds out Sev is his father too; I think you'll like how he figures it out.  I'm pretty sure that will happen in Part Three, so stay tuned for more!

    You're right, Lily does travel through time trying to fix certain events and prevent catastrophes from happening in the war.  I'm pretty sure that PoA talks about how a time turner can make people crazy if they know about you traveling in time, which is why Lily strives to be so secretive; she doesn't want Sev to go mental (though I think he is anyway, since she's gone so frequently).

    I know this is a bit confusing, but I also think it's the best plot line I've ever come up with.  I'm glad your still enjoying it!

    -P.G. 

Title: Part One 30 Dec 2008 7:06 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG OMG OMG!!! That was absolutely amazing!

    I'm hooked! I simply can't wait for your next update! This story is so unique, and I love the spy, intrigue, romance and every other kind of aspect of the story.

    Lily is really manipulative in this, isn't she?

    You're probably going to say wait and see, but is Harry really Sevs?

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  I'm so glad your excited!  I wanted to try something different and I'm glad that it seems to be going over well.  My Lily is very manipulative, isn't she?  She definitely has her own agenda in this fic, which I think is interesting because you really don't tend to expect this kind of behavior from her.  I'm afraid that I cannot tell you whether or not Harry is Sev's son; no worries though, that will be cleared up in the next chapter.  

    Thanks again for your support--your review made me really happy!  :D

    -P.G. 

Title: Part One 30 Dec 2008 4:24 pm
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I must admit it was confusing to read and I do not like this Lily at all, in fact I really want to slap her. Having said that I like this Sev and his hidden thoughts about Harry. I am interested in seeing where you go with this story and I look forward to reading more.

    Author's Response:

    Hi, thanks for reading!  I'm sorry that you found this confusing; I'm trying out a different writing style here and I didn't know how effective it would be.  Also, I'm trying to portray a different Lily and Severus than most people are used to reading about.  Everyone automatically assumes that Lily would be this very kind and nice person and I wanted to write her with a bit of a different personality.  Here, she's going to be far from perfect and if you're confused about her motives, well...you'll find out more about that later :D.  

    I'm glad you like my Sev though.  Prepare to see a lot more of Harry in the next part.  I can't say too much about them without giving things away.  Again, thank you for your support and honesty in your review.

    -P.G. 

Title: Part One 30 Dec 2008 6:47 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow this is very interesting and I'd love to see more of it. I especially liked the bit with harry and Sev in the infirmary and how Sev holds him and also with Lily at the end when she shows him the time turner.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the support--this has been terribly hard to write because of the details and I wasn't really sure how it would go over with readers because of it's unique style.  I really like the part with Sev and Harry in the infirmary too; it was a last minute idea, but it seems to fit in well.  Expect to see a lot more of Sev and Harry in Part Two.  Thanks again!

    -P.G. 


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