Ya know, all of this could've been avoided if Albus hadn't insisted that Harry go to the Dursleys. If he had gone the Weasleys none of this would've happened.
I'm just waiting for someone (a Weasley perhaps) to say "This is your fault, Headmaster"
| Title: New First Introductions
| 22 Jan 2009 11:12 pm
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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LOL! I knew that Snape wouldn't like it! Hee hee!
Can't wait for the next update! Oh, one question; does Harry still have his magic, or will he be a squib?
Having to start all over again like a baby; how sad!
So will it be Snape that will be taking care of Harry; I bet that he'll just love THAT! ;0
Oh my God, how horrible. Why always Harry! It is going to be very difficult for him to start all over again!
This story is great, and very original. Off to the next chappie!
Oh no! Poor, poor Harry! What have they done to him? Yikes!
Can't wait for next chapter!
Oh my! This is so good. I'm on eggshells. I hope that poor Harry is going to be ok!
This is great, but somehow it got posted twice on the same page.
I can't wait, I'm going to read the next chapter. Poor Harry, he never gets a break, does the poor kid?
| Title: Missing!
| 22 Jan 2009 5:30 pm
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| Reviewer: Belelaith (Anonymous)
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The first chapter seems to have been repeated so that the text appears twice as long.
An excellent start. I'll be waiting to see what else you can come up with.
| Title: Missing!
| 22 Jan 2009 9:47 am
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| Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous)
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Hello! this is a very promising first chapter, and I like it (even if it is not very original: several fics begin with Harry alone at the train station). There is just one problem: you typed the chapter twice!
Your story repeated several paragraphs, you might want to check it. Otherwise a good start.
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