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Title: With the Help of Hedwig 09 Jan 2009 3:25 pm
Reviewer: Kaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thank you! I agree, that is something I would like to have seen. An excellent story

    Author's Response: Thanks for your opinion!
Title: With the Help of Hedwig 08 Jan 2009 1:35 am
Reviewer: cutecess (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story! Please continue it!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I will try my best!
Title: With the Help of Hedwig 07 Jan 2009 7:30 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi! You said hermione was going to Greek - I think you mean Greece! (; It was quite a good story, I like Albus actually doing something for once. The animo was a clever idea too. Just make sure it flows properly, you tend to write really well in one 'emotion setting' and then the story seems to change suddenly. It's not major, just to look out for. (:

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for showing me the mistake. I changed it.

    As for the flow problem; could you please give me an example? 

Title: With the Help of Hedwig 07 Jan 2009 10:11 am
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was really good! I would like to read more! Hint! Hint! :-)

    Author's Response: :) Thanks for your review!
Title: With the Help of Hedwig 06 Jan 2009 6:14 am
Reviewer: shan182 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    hey! great story! would love to read more! the road to recovery would be one that is trying on both harry and his caregiver (sev? XD haha hopefully). would love to read what happens next! keep them juices flowing!

    Author's Response: I'm very sure that I will write a Sev as Harry's guardian story as a sequel to this one!
Title: With the Help of Hedwig 06 Jan 2009 4:12 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry, I'm glad he's going to be saved and that he's stopped wanting to self-inflict pain on himself. The Durselys deserve whatever Moody plans on doing to them for abusing Harry like that and making him feel the way he did.

    P.S. I’m sorry to hear that you have to deal with cases like this at your job, it must be very emotionally straining.

    Author's Response: Thanks you very much for your kind words!
Title: With the Help of Hedwig 06 Jan 2009 12:25 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    i love it!! You have to write a sequel because that's not even an ending!!!!!!!!!! I'm assuming that the person who could talk to animals told them that harry was hurting himself and being abused because of hedwig???? i think that's funny... ironic that he didn't think of that- but maybe he secretly wanted to be discovered. i know that's how i felt.

    Author's Response: Yes, many people still want others to find out what they do to themself. I really think I will write a sequel but first I have to finish one of my other stories. 
Title: With the Help of Hedwig 05 Jan 2009 10:58 pm
Reviewer: ORKCHILD (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is a really good first chapter and you should write more

    Author's Response: I think about writing a chaptered "Snape as Harry's guardian story" as a sequel to this one-shot, but first I have to finish at least one of my other stories. I have actually 3 chaptered stories running and that is already very confusing. :)
Title: With the Help of Hedwig 05 Jan 2009 10:57 pm
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like it, would like to see a sequel. I was interested to read your introductory note as well. Where do you work as a social worker, are you in the UK, US or elsewhere?

    Author's Response: I definitely think about writing a chaptered sequel to this story, but first I have to finish one of my other 3 chaptered stories. I work in Germany.
Title: With the Help of Hedwig 05 Jan 2009 10:42 pm
Reviewer: sappysam (Signed) [Report This]
    MORE MORE MORE DEFINATELY!!!!!!!!! Very good i was disapointed to see only 1 chapter - this will make a really good story at least 40 chapters!!!!! hehehe!!

    Author's Response: Yes, I'm sure it would make a good chaptered story but I first have to finish one of my other 3 unfinished stories. It's already very hard to not get confused with the different plots. When I have finished one of them I will start writing a sequal to this one!

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