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Reviews For A Conversation with Batman
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! -P.G.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading--I'm glad you liked it! I've been thinking about a sequel, but I'm not sure when I'll get around to it. We'll see what happens. Have a good day! -P.G.
Author's Response: Wow, that's quite a compliment! I'm glad you thought my slang was used properly--I was a bit worried about that. I'm also glad you liked young Harry's enthusiasm; I wanted to write a story where the Dursley's hadn't drained it all out of him. Thanks for reading! -P.G.
I giggled so much. I loved it! Actually, loved would not be correct.... Seeing as how I still love the story.... Well then, I LOVE IT! Gr, sorry rambling. I have a rambling issue >< Keep up the wonderfully fantasmic work!!!!!! ~Asparas Author's Response: Lol, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading! -P.G.
----------------------------- Story Plot: 490/2500 Direction Flow: 375/640 Descriptions: 2/10 Spelling & Grammer: 2288/2294 Character Introductions: 3/7 Dialogs Speech: 70/100 POV: 2/3 Story Opening: 1/3 Story End: 1/3 ----------------------------- Overall: 3230/5560 Percentage: 58 Currently Slytherin house is in lead, though Ravenclaw are not far behind. Interesting story! Author's Response: Hello Luna, thank you for reading my story. While I do generally appreciate reviews, I am going to be blunt with you about this one: it is not helpful at all. Before you get mad at me for saying that, let me explain why. I don't know where you got all of the numbers from and I don't know what you were looking for in each category. For example, in Spelling and Grammar, I don't know where you got the number 2,294--why isn't it 3,000 or 300? Would the number be larger or smaller if this was a chapter fic? Plus, you've indicated that I've lost 6 points in that category, yet you didn't say what I did wrong. If you don't tell me what I did wrong, how does this review help me improve my writing in the future? The main point of this is that if you use a rubric, the author needs to know why they got points taken off and why a category is worth a specific amount of points. Also, I honestly can't tell whether or not you enjoyed the fic with this review. You described my story as both "interesting" and "amazing" in the review, but yet it only a 58 percent? That's an "F" at most schools, so why would you think this story was interesting and amazing if it failed your test. Again, I'd like to thank you for taking the time to review me, but I don't recommend using this method again. Authors are looking for feedback they can use and this information really tells me nothing about my writing. -P.G.
~Frosty Author's Response: Hi Frosty! I'm glad you enjoyed my fic and got a few laughs! Thanks for reading! -P.G.
Great story! I loved Harry asking about "Batman's" pants, and then saying that he wanted a pair like that. ;-} Very cute. Leilia Author's Response: Hi, thanks for reading! I think the idea of Harry wanting the same pants as Batman is absolutely hilarious. I'm glad you enjoyed my fluff!
-P.G.
Author's Response: Thanks! Batman and Snape...it's a very easy mix up to make, you know! I bet if Albus wore red on the first night of school, a lot of Hogwarts firsties might think he's Father Christmas, lol. I'm glad you liked it! -P.G.
Author's Response: Thank you for such a nice review! I'm glad you liked my young Harry--I wanted to portray him as being joyful despite the abuse in his life, as if he hadn't let the Dursley's break his spirit. And who doesn't love a bit of cavity-inducing fluff? Lol! Thanks for reading! -P.G.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! -P.G. |
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