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Reviews For Better Off Forgotten
I did notice one or two small errors. The part where Wormtail goes to take the blood from Harry, you wrote "the bonds grew taught". Wrong word there, that's the taught that a teacher does, you want the word "taut" here, when a rope is pulled tightly. And the second to last line, "Harry stared at Wormtail's face is disbelief" that should be "in". Author's Response: Thank you for pointing those out! And I'm really sorry about the late reply!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing, you made my day!
Author's Response: Yes ma'am! I'll get the third chapter up sometime next week...probably.
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