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Reviews For Better Off Forgotten
I like Tobias here, he's gruff and sarcastic, but not cruel. Does Sev have a decent relationship with him in this story? I love the part when he told Harry "somewhere a village is missing its idiot" I saw that on a T-shirt once and died laughing! It's a typical Snape saying. I'm assuming Fendi is an Old English sheepdog and not a Border collie? I love dogs. Author's Response: Right on the nose! Fendi is, indeed, an Old English sheepdog. As for the Snape's relationship--you'll just have to wait, we'll get around to it soon enough, :) Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll get it up as soon as I edit it!
Author's Response: Like father like son. I have to make him at least a little Snapish, can't stand characters that are OOC. Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you like it.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! Yes, I had to give Tobias a dog, he needs someone around, I imagine he would be quite lonely otherwise. I love the name Jesse, better then the other names I thought of.
As for Harry's new temporary name being Jesse... At first I had to re-adjust, but I got over it relatively soon. I like the name anyway, and it's way better then the ones Tobais offered, hehe. BTW, nice ending to the chapter, lol My immature side is snickering like crazy ;D Author's Response: ...I wouldn't talk about Harry not being eaten so soon--exspecially once you see what Voldemort does. Tobias's would probably be surprised if Harry dod anything magical, they probably get in touch with any magical person he might know. But, for the story's sake, that won't happen. It would be over too quick, lol. Yeah, readers would kill me if I called him one of those other evil names that Tobias mentioned, lol. Glad you got used to it, and that you reviewed! Yes, I just had to add a farting dog, dad and my brothers would be so proud, lol. Thank you! |
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