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Title: Chapter 4: Serving A Monster 31 Dec 2012 2:08 am
Reviewer: MyDarkGuardian (Signed) [Report This]
    This is great! Loving the Severus perspective!
Title: Chapter 4: Serving A Monster 26 Feb 2009 4:31 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Gone With Wind's a classic and it's actually an excellent book, I've read several times and seen the movie as much. Watch it first, it'll help you get the gist of all the characters and the plot.

    Poor Severus1 I feel so bad that he has to go back to that disgusting awful thing. And then at the OOP meetings, the others sneer at him for his work. I'd like to shove them in a room with the monster and see how long they'd last!

    I guess Wormtails going to bite the big one, huh? Well, at least he fulfilled his debt. Hope Severus finds Harry soon. But he'll probably die when he finds out who Harry's with!

    Author's Response: Thank you for your review! Yes, Gone With The Wind is an interesting read, I wasn't saying it was bad. I'm just used to fantasy books, hehe.
Title: Chapter 4: Serving A Monster 21 Feb 2009 6:47 am
Reviewer: Kodak717 (Signed) [Report This]
    I don't think I've ever read a fanfic where Wormtail saves Harry. It's good - gives him a human dimension you don't usually see associated with the character. Nice job, and very nice writing.

    Author's Response: Even bad guys have feelings and a sense of right and wrong--well, maybe not Voldie but that's a different subject.  Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 4: Serving A Monster 20 Feb 2009 4:45 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    It sure will be a needle in the hay-stack search in trying to find Harry. I mean, not only is Harry missing, but having no knowledge of whom he is, it’s not likely he’ll try to contact anyone and say ‘here I am!’. Boy, I wouldn't want to have to be the one to tell people that, but at least they'll know he's alive.

    P.S. Poor Scorpia! Some kids are just too mischievous for their own good, but you'd think they'd choose a better hiding place, lol :)

    Author's Response: Lol, it wasn't too bad, last time I saw they were horrible. That was a few years ago and the kids were good this time. It will be a pain trying to find Harry. He has no idea who he is, Tobias does not have connections with the Wizarding world--yep, utter chaos here we come.
Title: Chapter 4: Serving A Monster 18 Feb 2009 8:38 am
Reviewer: Attackfish (Signed) [Report This]
    Word of advise, try reading the Southern accents out loud. It helps.

    I never thought I'd say this, but poor Peter, tortured and killed because for once the slimeball tried to do the right thin, and by the way, screwing that up royally too? Man, Scorpia, you're awful.

    Author's Response: Peter didn't really fail, he got Harry away from Voldemort and no one knows where he is--but the bad thing is that NO ONE knows where he is, lol. At least Harry's safe...for a while at least. I'll try reading the accents out loud, thanks!
Title: Chapter 4: Serving A Monster 18 Feb 2009 4:12 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Believe me, reading Gone with the Wind sure beats watching the movie...which I've never been able to do completely.
    Great writing. Very interesting, detailed and nicely paced.

    Author's Response: Tee hee, I've only seen bits and pieces of the movie, never the whole thing. Thank you, and I'm glad you liked it!

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