Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: The Man Who Lived 08 Oct 2009 10:18 pm
Reviewer: autumnamberleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    oh wow...oh wow...that was powerful!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  What a great compliment!  I'm glad you enjoyed it!

    -P.G. 

Title: The Man Who Lived 26 Jan 2009 3:19 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG! That was so beautiful!

    So touching, and as sad as I am that Sirius is gone, I'm glad that it wasn't Severus that was killed.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  I'm really happy that Sev pulled through too--imagine how bad things would be if he didn't!  Yikes!

    Anyways, thanks for reading!

    -P.G. 

Title: The Man Who Lived 26 Jan 2009 4:15 am
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi PG. Me again. I just reread Tab's chapter and I did see that Tonks fell back when Sev yelled at her to do so, but I thought Remus was already behind Sev and Sirius and that he had stayed there. And in the thick of battle, I can't see how Bella would have been able to activate the Portkey. Did Harry still have the Portkey...I'm a bit confused about that.

    Lesley

    Author's Response:

    I reread as well.  I think you're right, only Tonks retreated, though Remus really isn't mentioned and I have a hard time believing he just sat through all that.  I don't know, when I wrote this, I assumed he had left.  I don't think we know what the portkey is yet.  We do know that Bella touched Harry when Sirius brought him out to the plot and that if Bella isn't lying, a word said in the potions shop sent Harry away.  He never activated the portkey--someone else did, though we don't really know how or if it was on purpose or not.  I'm sure OE will provide us with some lovely answers in the next chapter.

    -P.G. 

Title: The Man Who Lived 26 Jan 2009 2:53 am
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, very clever, PG...very clever indeed. Foa a few moments, I couldn't think what was wrong with the side of Sev's face. I had a vague thought that he wasn't Sev, that someone was polyjuiced to look like Sev and the polyjuice was wearing off in an odd way. LOL.

    I do have one question though. Where was Remus throughout all of this battle? Wasn't he there when Sirius was killed?

    Just a thought.

    Lesley

    Author's Response:

    Thanks Lesley; I'm glad you enjoyed it.  It would have been interesting if it was someone else polyjuiced to be Sev--an auror perhaps?  That would have been great if I had chosen to really kill Sev here.

    The thing about Remus not being here is actually easily answered.  I picked up kind of late in OE's battle scene, but before Sirius jumps in front of Sev, Bellatrix was actually threatening to say say the portkey password again and send Harry somewhere else because Sev had brought Tonks and Remus along.  So, to prevent Harry from being portkeyed to Merlin only knows where, both Tonks and Remus vacated the area (though I'm not quite sure why she didn't make Sirius leave too--I might ask OE about that; maybe it'll be in the next chapter, or I've just missed the explanation...).  

    Anyways, thanks for reading!

    -P.G. 

Title: The Man Who Lived 26 Jan 2009 2:34 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    I like that -

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    -P.G. 

Title: The Man Who Lived 25 Jan 2009 9:55 pm
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really, really enjoyed this, PG! What a great alternate to the chapter. And I just love the idea of a curse scar for Severus--a lovely father/son trait. LOL And it was nice to see them recognize right away exactly what Sirius did. I also enjoyed your Bellatrix. It was fun to see she and Severus fight, since they didn't really have much of a chance in my chapter. LOL Great job, as always. I hope you won't mind if I share the link with the group. :oD

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.  I love Sev with a curse scar too--I'm glad your fic gave me such an interesting idea.  Go ahead and link away!  Thanks for letting me write this little ditty!  I had a lot of fun with it!

    -P.G. 

Title: The Man Who Lived 25 Jan 2009 8:14 pm
Reviewer: Nyx the Panther (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Interesting. I bet Sev is going to love his scar, Lol! He did get a scar, right? Anyway nice work.

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you enjoyed my fic.  He did get a scar--a curse scar, just like Harry's.

    -P.G. 


Disclaimer Charm: Harry Potter and all related works including movie stills belong to J.K. Rowling, Scholastic, Warner Bros, and Bloomsbury. Used without permission. No copyright infringement is intended. No money is being made off of this site. All fanfiction and fanart are the property of the individual writers and artists represented on this site and do not represent the views and opinions of the Webmistress.

Powered by eFiction 3.3