Awww!!! I LOVED it! SO MUCH! omg that was so terribly sweet! Very good story! I loved the way you portrayed Snape! The only think I think was not quite right was that the kids didn't act 11 years old, but that's okay, because I still really liked it. Haha :D Thanks for an amazing story!
Hahahah! You're so funny! xD
"He's playing. I didn't even know he did that." That line, I read it like 3 times. It was so sad, but it seems realistic, which is even more sad. Ahh, I'm rambling now!lol Awesome Chappie!
Aw, I liked the how he had to write that he wasnt a freak for his lines.
| Title: His Child
| 07 Feb 2011 3:28 pm
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| Reviewer: Shhhhh (Anonymous)
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This was the absolute BEST story I have ever read - and I've read THOUSANDS! I just stayed up ALL NIGHT devouring it (sigh, now I'm even late to work finishing) it. THANK YOU - I lOVED IT! It was awesome!!!! I can't wait to read everything else. ps: The bunnies were sort of cute, too.
Strip-tease! Hahahahaha!!! xD
| Title: His Child
| 05 Feb 2011 9:47 am
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| Reviewer: Albatross1029 (Anonymous)
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Loved this story. Thank you. :)
| Title: His Child
| 29 Jan 2011 11:17 am
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| Reviewer: Helga (Anonymous)
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THANK you for such a masterpiece! I fall in love with this story and it's chatacters!
Wonderfully written chapter (as always). I absolutely love the tension that's growing between these two characters. It's realistic and works perfectly in your verse.
But, moreso, it makes me quite eager to see this tension dispelled.
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