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Title: Axis and Allies 06 May 2009 5:33 pm
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Absolutely wonderful chapter. I just love this story--one of my favorites. Although, hate the cliffie! And after they were getting along so well and everything. Okay, maybe not 'so well', but better. It was great to see Tonks in this. I was really proud of Severus. I really hope things haven't gone backward too much. Keep it up. Can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks, and sorry! Yeah...I feel bad for Sev in this chapter. He really is trying, but he's just not a 'soft touch,' even when he sorta wants to be. Yeah I was really happy when it became logical for Tonks to get involved - I really like her! I don't know how Harry will react to this latest scare, or Malfoy either. Hopefully it won't go too badly. :-)
Title: Axis and Allies 06 May 2009 5:23 pm
Reviewer: Quynce (Signed) [Report This]
    One of the best chapters so far-- I don't even mind the cliffie after so much fun. Prof. Snape can't afford to always be nice, but it was great to see him show a little mercy. And the time- out was interesting from both POV. Blaise's intelligence, although limited experience, was also great to see. Harry really needs to work on his impulse control-- Draco's annoying, but punching him? It all fits the profile of an abused kid, though.

    I'm very curious about Malfoy now, will he be a protected only child that doesn't recognize Harry's behavior, a death eater in training that has seen how people react after several beatings, or the child of a sadist who knows exactly what Harry is doing?

    Author's Response: Yeah, I honestly think Harry was just bored...he seemed to enjoy the fight, while it lasted. But yeah, impulse control would be helpful. I really have no idea how Draco will react. We never see him have to, in canon. Maybe, faced with somebody whose life has been so much more difficult, he'll grow up a bit? Who knows? Stranger things have happened. (That's certainly not me saying that that WILL happen, though...I still don't know, either!
Title: Axis and Allies 06 May 2009 5:03 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! poor Harry! of all the people who could have been in the common room it was Malfoy, he doesnt seem the type to keep his mouth shut unless there is something in it for him, maybe Severus could oblviate him? lol, cant wait to see how it turns out :)

    Author's Response: Yeah, bad bad bad. I TOTALLY didn't plan that one. People are unpredictable, so I guess characters should be, too. Harry just HAD to hit Malfoy...
Title: Axis and Allies 06 May 2009 3:49 pm
Reviewer: achilles_eel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Anticipation is SO not a spice; poison, most definitely. I hate cliffhangers.

    If I ever decide to make myself an account, I promise I'll favorite this, I just like it that much.
    ..Drats, now I want to sign up. Oh the evilness!

    I had a feeling hew was a metamorph; glamours just didn't make as much sense.

    I hope Malfoy is smart enough to keep any comments he might have to himself. Do I sense the possibility of a blossoming friendship??? :P

    Hope you update soon!

    Author's Response: Oh. Sorries. :-) I will try and relieve the agony soon, but I felt the need to share it. I have exams => I transfer pain onto you people. All's fair in love and war, after all. I honestly don't know how Malfoy will react. Certainly Harry is NOT happy that he was there for that. We'll have to see...
Title: Axis and Allies 06 May 2009 1:16 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    A cliffie? Ah, you're no fun!

    That was brilliant by the way. Poor Harry, he is so stubborn, and all he has to do is ask for Snape's help and open up to him. It's not easy for him to trust though, but Snape is handling everything very well.

    Having Tonks help him was a good idea. I like the whole metamorphis thing. Very unique.

    I'm looking forward to your next review.

    Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah I kinda liked this chapter, too. Dunno why. Sometimes I like a chapter, sometimes I don't. This one I liked. I sorta feel bad for Snape in this one, though - he's trying so hard, and still screws up. :-(
Title: Axis and Allies 06 May 2009 8:35 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    update soon and no murdering will take place, at least not outside of the story! ;-)
    It's the least you can do after a cliffie, don't you agree?

    Anyhow, great chapter. It was lots of fun having Harry and Tonks meet.

    Author's Response: Thanks! And yes, I will update ASAP. As you'll read from my other responses, it is my exam week. I'll do my best.
Title: Axis and Allies 06 May 2009 8:25 am
Reviewer: chelsea (Anonymous) [Report This]
    oh no the dreaded cliffie...but the next chapter sounds like a good one..poor harry...hope the next chapter is up soon!

    Author's Response: I'll try, but that's all I can promise - exams are EVIL.
Title: Axis and Allies 06 May 2009 7:48 am
Reviewer: MissD (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Anticipation indeed...how could you? Best chapter yet, please...please update soon.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! :-) Working on it! Exam week, though...
Title: Axis and Allies 06 May 2009 7:34 am
Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I don't hate you for the cliffie, but only because you update pretty quickly!! (LOL)

    Good chapter. I'm glad Snape is finally doing something nice for Harry that Harry can recognize as nice.

    Author's Response: LOL I'll work on it - I'm REALLY in the crux of exam week now, so while I don't think I'll fall off the '10 day' list, it might be a bit longer than this last chappie took. Yeah, Snape's trying. Too bad he had to screw up in front of Malfoy.
Title: Axis and Allies 06 May 2009 7:32 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    oh no. Poor Harry! What a mess for him! it was good that he fought back before though. I hope that Malfoy won't make things too miserable for him! It's so cool that Harry is a metamorphmagus and that Tonks is helping him. :)

    Good chapter!! thanks for the update!

    Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah he's got a bit to figure out, now, doesn't he? So does Malfoy. I suppose Snape had to screw up eventually, but did it have to be in front of Malfoy, seriously?

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