Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Omission or Commission 07 Apr 2009 10:01 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I like how Severus told Albus the truth, because sometimes he can be blind, but he really does need to know what's been going on. And he is right, Sev is the best one to handle Harry at this stage, he ought to remember what he felt like growing up under Tobias and use that to better understand and help Harry.

    Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah I figured both Albus and Severus benefited from that. Albus needed a reality check, and Severus is just too self deprecating for his own good. :-)
Title: Omission or Commission 07 Apr 2009 7:17 pm
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    hello, I'm enjoying this story a lot. It is realistic in how the characters would act. However I have noticed that there are a few spellings errors. For example Flue is Floo. I'm not one to be able to spell either, but I would use a spell checker, or in the case of Floo reference it in the books or ask another fan. (I'm just letting you know, I hope you don't take this in a bad way and lose your muse, cause I want more of the story asap. :D)

    Author's Response: I do actually use a spell checker - which is part of the problem. I thought floo was spelled that way, my spell-checker actually disagreed. I think "floo" as in "floo powder" is either a British term that my American spell checker doesn't like, or a JKR make-up. I'll fix it. Thanks! And no worries, I'm in no danger of losing my muse. :-)
Title: Omission or Commission 07 Apr 2009 4:09 pm
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent. A wonderful little insert that has added to the story in general. It is lovely to see this close relationship between Severus and Albus.

    Lesley~

    Author's Response: Thanks!!
Title: Omission or Commission 07 Apr 2009 3:16 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooh im glad you put the chat between these two in, I love to see them showing their bond : )

    Author's Response: Thanks! Me, too. I figure Albus is the best role-model Severus has for how to treat Harry. (Though of course Severus' own personality will get in the way of some of that!)
Title: Omission or Commission 07 Apr 2009 8:02 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! What an ending cliff hanger! I hope that Harry is okay!!

    Poor Harry. Snape is right in a lot of ways. I wonder what it will take for Harry to trust him.

    Great story so far! Thank you for the updates! :)

    Author's Response: AH! Okay I really have to clarify this. It's the same infirmary blow-up as before. Thanks for the review!
Title: Oops? 07 Apr 2009 5:48 am
Reviewer: FawkesSong (Signed) [Report This]
    Poppy was great!

    Author's Response: Thanks :-) I hadn't expected her to have any real role in this story but it's definately shaping out that way. Harry decided he liked her and I doubt he'll back down on that anytime soon.
Title: Omission or Commission 07 Apr 2009 5:24 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! Harry again?

    I loved that conversation. Dumbledore needed to hear the reality, and Snape needs to realise that he can still be what Harry needs.

    Nice job. I' m looking forward to reading more.

    Author's Response: Ooh, perhaps I should've made that clear. This is the first time, when Severus leaves to talk to the Headmaster while Poppy deals with Harry and he ends up freaking out. rnrnGlad you liked the convo. :-)
Title: Omission or Commission 07 Apr 2009 4:49 am
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    First, very well named chapter.

    I'm glad that you decided to add this conversation to the storyline. I liked Snape's combination of relief (that Albus didn't know) and fear (that Albus didn't know).

    Author's Response: Thanks! I try to keep chapter titles vaguely interesting. :-)
Title: Omission or Commission 07 Apr 2009 4:48 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thanks for the bonus chapter! That was an interesting discussion between Severu and DD. I'm glad we got to see them discussing Harry's situation. Thank you for sharing it with us.

    Author's Response: No problem!! I'm having lots of fun with this story, too. When you write, it's like you get to dictate your own ideal fanfic. (Though sometimes it's frustrating 'cause you know what you want to say, and can't make it come out right.
Title: Omission or Commission 07 Apr 2009 4:42 am
Reviewer: N_Forest (Signed) [Report This]
    flue is actually spelled floo. I like this story. It's interesting and I like your writing style. Keep it up!

    Author's Response: Thanks a lot! (and I'll fix the error eventually - I thought it was spelled floo but my spellcheck didn't like it)

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