Wow, great development! I can't help but wonder if Severus will ever grow the trust and rapport with Harry that Poppy has. I look forward to seeing him try. :) I'm glad that Harry is finally looked after, but he still needs his potions. Great chapter! thanks so much for sharing it with us!
Author's Response: LOL thanks for the reminder...
Aw, I'm so glad that Snape is finally realising that he is making Harry nervous. I'm looking forward to seeing where you're going with this story.
Author's Response: Thanks!!
Poor harry, he has so many issues to deal with. And it doesn't help that he and Snape strike sparks off each other, does it? But then, since Vernon was probably the one who abused him, any adult male would be unlikely to gain Harry's trust for a long time. But at least Severus is willing to try and maybe Harry will start to see that.
Author's Response: We'll see, won't we? Thanks for the review! :-)
Hang in there, Sev, you can do. Just remember, an injured, scared child is the same as an injured scared animal. Treat it carefully, talk in low tones and count all of your fingers after you feed it.
Author's Response: lol I like that. :-)
Title: World War I
| 01 Apr 2009 5:12 am
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Reviewer: Rachael (Anonymous)
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WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH RHIANNAN YOU HAVE TO UPDATE YOU ARE SOOOOOO AWESOME I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!! Seriously, it's great. This is amazing, and I love your writing style and I like Harry, even, which I NEVER do!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks!! It's really too bad I can't talk at writing club - you could help me throw ideas around like my sister has started to. (She's the person who reviewed just before you did)
Title: World War I
| 01 Apr 2009 12:19 am
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Reviewer: qtuani7 (Anonymous)
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Again, awesome chapter! Twas confuzled bout somethin though, didn't notice til after I reviewed before. 11 year old that knows about the treaty of Versailles? Conceivable but you said you wanted to show an uber mature 11 year old that was still young too---still being pretty badly educated might help give that effect. Plus, gotta keep in mind that the American education system sucks ((grin)) This chapter is probably your best written yet, and is longest, so yays! Write more!!
Author's Response: Thank you!! You might of missed it, but I mentioned that Harry used to read History books in his spare time, bacause he could hide out from Dudley in the school library. :-)
Title: World War I
| 01 Apr 2009 12:01 am
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Reviewer: DaShrimp (Anonymous)
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!!NANNAN!! I just emailed you this Beta'd up, so go get that sometime. In the meantime, write the next bloody chapter! I want more intense 11 year old!
Author's Response: You are so weird. Qtuani and DaShrimp?? What kinda names are those?? Anyway everyone, I'd like to introduce my brat of a sister, Gwendolynn
lol I cannot believe I forgot to add this to my story alerts! oh well now I have hehe and im glad because this is getting really good! I love the whole thing and cannot wait for more! :D
Author's Response: Thanks!!! Sorry I forgot to respond to this sooner!
This is very good! I'm so glad that Snape and Poppy have seen his injuries finally. I hope that this means that Harry wont' have to go back to the Durseleys. Well done, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Don't worry. Snape's protective instinct will kick in soon. (Whether Harry appreciates it or not...)
Very interesting, please please update soon, want moore. Thank you for that long , absorbing chapter.
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