Ooh this looks promising wish you would complete it
Such a shame this was never continued.
I loved how you portrayed the Dursleys, they're so magic phobic it's funny! And I can't blame Harry for being puzzled at Snape's behavior, but I hope he listens to him and stays where he's put!
Then again this is Harry . . .so I'm sure SOMETHING will happen to him before school.
Looking forward to your next post!
lovely! you got Snape down in how he reacted to Petunia. I'm so glad that Harry is rescued, but I wonder what is held in store in the future. How will his stay in Diagon Alley go? i love that Harry seemed to make excuses for Snape to stay. lovely.
Thanks so much for the update!
Great start! I'm definitely interested in reading more :)
I just loved the whole scene between Snape and the Dursleys! It was so comical and their actions sounded believable. *snickers* I can' t get over how crazy Petunia was acting, and she so deserved Severus’s threat for what she said about Lily.
Harry certainly seems bewildered with what's just happened to him and Snape’s involvement. Can’t say I blame him though! Please post more soon, I'm curios about what else you have planned.
"Looks like the beginning of a beautiful friendship"
Looking forward to more
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Great start! Looking forward to more!
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| 20 Mar 2009 5:20 am
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Interesting start. Why didn't Harry have his vault key? In the books Harry retained possession of it after his first visit and without it he wouldn't have been able to get into his vault.
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