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Reviews For The Photograph
Title: The Photograph 24 Jan 2022 5:50 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This was great! I loved it from premise to denouement.
Title: The Photograph 17 Jul 2011 7:02 am
Reviewer: 101Frozenfire101 (Signed) [Report This]
    AWW! I loved it. And it finally got rid of the rumor of Snape being a vamp :D
Title: The Photograph 17 Jul 2011 7:00 am
Reviewer: 101Frozenfire101 (Signed) [Report This]
    AWW! I loved it. And it finally got rid of the rumor of Snape being a vamp :D
Title: The Photograph 17 Jul 2011 6:56 am
Reviewer: 101Frozenfire101 (Signed) [Report This]
    AWW! I loved it. And it finally got rid of the rumor of Snape being a vamp :D
Title: The Photograph 04 Jun 2009 5:45 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Anonymous) [Report This]
    good tie-in! I'd been expecting a bit more about *why* they should suddenly begin thinking he was a vampire and why he wasn't eating, but the story was good and Snape's reactions were well written!
Title: The Photograph 18 May 2009 6:50 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix Phyre (Signed) [Report This]
    Good story, Adah. It was nice to see that Snape at least had the kindness to give the son of his worst enemy a picture of Lily. The thing is, though, even though Harry is the son of James Potter, Snape never seems to realize that he is also the son of Lily Evans.

    You did a great job writing this, and I hope to see more stories from you soon.
Title: The Photograph 08 May 2009 7:58 am
Reviewer: Bil (Signed) [Report This]
    Great fic! I like the scenes at the beginning from the two points of view, Ron pointing out why Snape's a vampire and then the explanations for *why* Snape's doing whatever it is. Just goes to show that everything depends on your point of view!

    Harry's reasoning for why he's so set on discrediting Snape is wonderful. His thought that Hogwarts without Snape would be perfect is to me just what Harry would think; it's also so sad, poor boy. I like the idea that Snape spends the anniversary of Lily's death remembering her; that's (dare I say it) sweet. The confrontation between Harry and Snape is great. The unfolding similarities between the two and Snape's understanding of that are well done. And I love the line "His eyes seemed less haunting and more haunted." The quiet handing over of the photo was great; understated, because Snape would never admit to doing something so sympathetic, yet exactly what Harry needed.

    The ending was great, especially knowing how the canon version of the scene went. I like this one better :) Snape sticking up for Harry! Great stuff. I enjoyed this story.

    Author's Response:

    The sheer length of this review makes me deliriously happy.

    I had to think like a little boy. I tried to take away all rational and thoughts of consequences and just think about immediate action - in other words - think like Harry :)

    Snape, if I've said it before I apologize, really is a big softie :))).  He'sy just a toasted marshmallow. All crunchy and burnt on the outside, and sweet and gooey in the inside. If Snape ever found the records of me saying that, however, I might be glared to death.

    I'm so glad I seemed to have found a balance between my GUSHYHUGGYSNAPE urges and my SNARKYEVILSNAPE urges. I wanted him to be understated and quietly nice, but snarky and hateable all the same.

    Thank you!

Title: The Photograph 08 May 2009 5:19 am
Reviewer: ObsessiveaboutSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I LIKE it!!!!

    Author's Response: I'm glad you LIKE it :)))))
Title: The Photograph 07 May 2009 9:34 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent story! Great descriptions and I loved the part where Severus gave Harry the photograph and realized that he had become like the one he hated.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I've always felt that if Snape only identified with Harry a little more - then everything would have been solved between the two. Well - not everything. But the major bulk of it. Thanks again!
Title: The Photograph 07 May 2009 9:19 pm
Reviewer: FrostedMidnight (Signed) [Report This]
    How wonderful! I loved this, it was very well written, and your character portrayals were very believeable. This would make a wonderful story if you decided to continue it, but it also ends nicely where it is.
    ~Frosty

    Author's Response: I am pandering with the idea of continuing with it once i come by some more time - thank you for the kind review!

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