I wish my school did something like that.
| Title: Chapter 3: Victory
| 14 Jul 2015 9:10 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely ending, I loved that the story did not become too mushy. Thank you so much
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much. I hate mushy. lol
| Title: Chapter 2: Compromise
| 14 Jul 2015 8:52 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Just a point but where are the girls in all this male bonding? However great chapter thank you
| Title: Chapter 1: Manipulation
| 14 Jul 2015 8:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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You are so clever in the way you pinpoint the characters from cannon and put them into your world!
You know, If you're happy and you know it, clap your hands. :D
good job with the story I really liked it
the story goes well the the character profiles of the oringal story line
Author's Response: thank you so much. I have tried to keep the characters true, but not always sure that I do, but glad to hear that you thought so.
I just had to laugh at the sentiment of Snape being "Harry's git"! I really enjoyed this story, watching their tentative relationship starting to unfold. Great duel, fun Quidditch match! And really cool to have Harry play "father/son matchmaker" with Remus & Neville! Great job! You packed a lot into a 3-chapter story, and I loved every minute I spent reading it! :-)
That was fluff....I'm not complaing tho lol
Author's Response: LOL Everyone needs fluff once in awhile!
I really enjoyed this story! Your description of the Quidditch game was fantastic. I felt like I was there, which is a mark of great writing, in my opinion. :)
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much. I'm honoured that you think so.
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