I loved the folklore, setting, and whole experience that Severus and Sarai are having. Terrific chapter!
They’re playing a dangerous game. I hope that Severus and Sarai get there fast.
Draco’s Slytherin side is definitely going to get them into trouble, and fast. What a cool character to appear at the chapter end!
Title: Dire Wolves, Banshees, and Tygrens, oh my!
| 27 Nov 2022 2:26 am
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Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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What a host of unusual, scary, yet cool creatures. It’s awesome seeing Severus and Sarai work as a team. They make a great pairing.
Jarillion is a total viper. I hope he gets his poisonous head chopped off when Severus and Sarai catch up to him. I like Draco’s plan. It’s clever, but hopefully it won’t backfire.
Title: A Bleak and Dismal Journey
| 27 Nov 2022 2:04 am
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Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Severus, Sarai, and Cafall have a long road ahead of them through the winter wilds. Thanks for the fun, if not chilling, ride.
You’ve created an amazing world of the fae, both summer and winter. I totally love it.
Terrific adventurous turn of events! Even as Jarillion is vile and loathsome. I love seeing Severus so protective over his children.
Can Severus feel through his Prince bond when Harry is in trouble no matter the distance? I certainly hope so!
This was an absolutely lovely chapter. I must try a fresh, juicy merlinna! I love the rapport that Nesmay is developing with her cousins, and the wand making work is very interesting. The chapter end was perfectly foreboding.
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