| Title: Chapter 52 - Hermione
| 14 Jun 2011 11:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Tresta (Anonymous)
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This story is amazing; I am really admiring your work and your characters. I am not sure if you have finished it; but please, please do!!! I couldn't bear to be left hanging with this.
If you ever do go back and fill in more of the story - how the boys were hurt etc- that would be interesting, but probably not necessary. I can see your decision to focus on how the boys heal more than how they were hurt, but it would be interesting to see more background in England. How long were they there before Dumbledore decided to send them to America? How did the relationship between Hermione and Draco develop, considering how much they hated each other in canon. Was it because he turned to their side, or was it because she supported him after the dungeon? Those are the kinds of things that would make a good "accessory" story if you have the desire.
Cool update, its good to see Light Arrow back even if he is grumpy and tired lol
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
I am so happy to seee a new chapter!! I relly hope your betas get all worked out because i love your stories.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
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