| Title: Chapter 1 – On the Plane
| 27 May 2011 9:37 am
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| Reviewer: Km (Anonymous)
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This is ridiculous. There are camps and institutions in the UK that could help them. Putting them in the US is just an obnoxious excuse. Characters never HAVE to be OOC. They can be in character after being raped -- they can act like their characters would. Yours are ridiculously OOC. It would not hurt to put in a little effort.
Author's Response: That's your opinion. Many others see it different. So I will just go on like I did and you go and find another story to read.
Lemme guess, the Messenger is from An Aunt's Love? I love that story. I am enjoying this one so far. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Yes, it is! Thank you very much for your review!
Okay, so I read the whole thing through and left a review for it on chapter 14. But I decided to start over and review each chapter while I wait for an update.
I have to say I was very disappointed over the death of Ron. Neville I could have tolorated, but I hate haveing Ron die.
I love haveing Snape on a plane and his sarcasm at Draco is great.
Author's Response: I don't kow why, but I always have problems writing Ron and I needed Harry to loose someone very close to become as bitter as he is now. Thanks for your opinion! Sunny
| Title: Chapter 1 – On the Plane
| 10 Jun 2009 7:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Rebel_Dream (Anonymous)
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Good start. I could not tell that English was not your fist language. I really loved it. I can not wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: I have a good beta! :) The next chapter is up now! Thank you very much for your review!
| Title: Chapter 1 – On the Plane
| 10 Jun 2009 4:11 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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I'm very interested to see more of this Cherokee Camp, and I know that it'll be great with all the research that you've done.
What horrible events for Harry and Draco to have to endure. I hope that this camp will be good for them, and that Severus can help them heal.
Author's Response: I'm very glad you like the start. The next chapter is up now. Thank you very much for your review!
| Title: Chapter 1 – On the Plane
| 10 Jun 2009 1:28 am
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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Interesting beginning. I would like to see where you go with this.
Author's Response: I'm very glad you like the start. The next chapter is up now. Thank you very much for your review!
| Title: Chapter 1 – On the Plane
| 09 Jun 2009 4:33 pm
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| Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous)
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Yeah Harry is going to be a tough nut to crack. I can see why Sev would hate flying, I hate being in a plane for 1//2 hour let alone 9.
Author's Response: I'm very glad you like the start. The next chapter is up now. Thank you very much for your review!
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