| Title: Chapter 3 – The first Shock
| 14 Jan 2011 7:22 pm
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| Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed)
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wow that was wow so empowering I could feel Harry's pain it brought tears to my eyes and Draco's fear but also loyalty
Author's Response: Thank you very much.
Harry's panic at being left alone was very belivable and well done. I felt really bad for him, but at the same time understand why they have to be seperated. I love how Harry wants Severus to know if he has a nightmare.
The sibling type interaction between Rose and Severus is done perfectly!
Wonderful Chapter!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it the way I wrote it! :)
| Title: Chapter 3 – The first Shock
| 07 Jul 2009 1:04 am
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| Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
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Very nice beginning! I'm mostly rather wary about stories that are set outside the canon settings, and even less inclined to read said stories if there's original characters in them. But this one's truly caught my attention and I'm enjoying it immensely (not the awful things Harry and Draco have been through, of course)!
Author's Response: I'm glad you gave it a try! Thanks for the review!
Very very intriquing story! I want to read more. You have a gift at developing the characters. It is very believable. Well done! Please update soon! I'll be on the lookout for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
| Title: Chapter 3 – The first Shock
| 24 Jun 2009 11:14 pm
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| Reviewer: Taryn (Signed)
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I like it, although I didn't think I would.
Author's Response: I'm surprised how many people say this. I never had guessed that someone would immediately feel negative by reading the title or the summary. It's odd and I still wonder why this is so. I'm very glad you gave it a try and like it now. Thanks for your review. It means a lot to me.
I love your story. Sounds like a great camp. I am sure both Draco and Harry will get the help they need there. The scene with Harry and White Cloud was stirring and it was very well written. Can't wait for the next chapter to come out.
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for your detailed review! I enjoyed it a lot! Thanks you!
| Title: Chapter 3 – The first Shock
| 24 Jun 2009 5:32 am
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| Reviewer: Kodak717 (Signed)
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This is an intriguing story - I don't think I've read anything like it before. Looking forward to the next chapter... :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm very glad you like it and reviewed!
| Title: Chapter 3 – The first Shock
| 24 Jun 2009 1:30 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Aw poor Harry and Draco. I hope the boys will be able to get through this and do it on their own. But that will come with time, I guess.
Again, I like the originality of this story and I can't wait to learn more about Indian culture.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I'm glad you like it and reviewed!
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