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Reviews For Cherokee Camp
Excellent Chapter! Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review!
Only one little thing, but I guess that's more a problem of me and my sieve-like head: I have a difficult time with all the native names - I get confused a bit, but I'm sure I'll get used to them with time... BTW: I am familiar with your home remedy against sunburn - curd is used that way in my family as well! I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Poor Harry - I hope that Draco's words didn't hurt him too much! And I hope he'll get closer to his horse, though I'm sympathatic with his reaction, because I'm allergic to horses... Author's Response: I'm very glad you like this story. Even if it is a bit depressive, but I can promise you it will become better for them in a few chapters. Yes, I know it is a bit difficult to remmeber all the names but I try to put Rose everytime beside Crying Horse so that he can't be confused with Black Hawk. Red Horse will hardly play a role in this story because he is a very silent guy and only takes care of the ranch and the animals. Good to hear that you are familar with the curd remedy. My beta was confused about it. Thank you very much for your very encouraging review!
cant wait for the next one!!! Author's Response: Yes, in the next chapter will be Harry's and Severus' reaction to Draco's screams. Thank you very much for your review!
Great chapter as usual. I hope that Draco can talk to Harry and clear the air. Author's Response: You will see more about Severus' thoughts in the next chapter! Thank you very much for your review! |
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