| Title: Chapter 23 - Someone else in Trouble
| 02 Apr 2010 10:34 pm
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| Reviewer: lenka (Anonymous)
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up-date up-date up-date :) come ooooon... ok, I know you are probably bussy with the other stories (and some other minor matters - like life and such ;)) but still...this wonderful story hasnt been updated in almost a month... so...you aint abandoning it, right? just feeling a need to make sure... :)
Author's Response: I have many more chapters written. This story seems to be hexed because even after my beta exchange I still have problems. My new beta has no time to edit as well. I hope this problem will be solved soon but I can't change anything.
| Title: Chapter 23 - Someone else in Trouble
| 15 Mar 2010 3:35 am
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| Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed)
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OK, now I've caught back up with you.
:-)
I really like how this story is developing. I'm pretty sure I've said that before, but it's still true!!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review!
| Title: Chapter 23 - Someone else in Trouble
| 14 Mar 2010 7:48 pm
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| Reviewer: little-sun (Signed)
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Nice! I have read three capters together today and liked them all. Mila
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
| Title: Chapter 23 - Someone else in Trouble
| 08 Mar 2010 4:35 am
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| Reviewer: KKJ (Anonymous)
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This was a tense chapter. I wasn't sure if Black Hawk would stay and I was worried that he would leave. I'm glad that he stayed, in the end and that he took the time to assure Harry he would be staying. Excellent work! I am excited for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Yay!!!! Black Hawk is staying.
Did I mention that I love this story?
I can't wait for the next chapter and some more Harry and Severus time. And even some time between Severus and Black Hawk.
I loved Severus's nervousness at the table it was perfect. I also liked how Harry ran after Black Hawk.
Please update soon! (And don't forget about the sneak peak! :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
I'm glad that White Cloud and Light Arrow helped Black Hawk to see that he is right where he belongs. I find it sad in a funny sort of way that he never realized that he was counseling the children. Sometimes, just being a shoulder to cry on is enough to help someone through their difficult times. I'm really happy that Black Hawk decided to stay.
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
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