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Title: Chapter 32 - Frustration 14 Jan 2011 10:49 pm
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    both boys have different issues and I am worried for Harry as i know how it feels to let anger overwhelm you

    Author's Response: They will both heal.
Title: Chapter 32 - Frustration 27 May 2010 12:20 am
Reviewer: TangledPencils (Signed) [Report This]
    I've just found this story, and it's very different from anything I've read before, and is rather "grabbing". I'm very much looking forward to reading more, please continue soon.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 32 - Frustration 26 May 2010 9:42 pm
Reviewer: Livy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wo - i just want to keep reading. Update soon

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 32 - Frustration 26 May 2010 5:21 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Now I just want to kick him.

    Liking Draco a lot more than whiny Harry right now, although that's part of each boy's healing, I know. Still, Harry's getting annoying. ;-)

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 32 - Frustration 25 May 2010 10:56 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry's behavior is perfectly normal under the circumstances. He's embarrassed at what he perceived as a sign of that he is weak and angry about the possibility of being denied what he wants. He has every right to desire revenge against those that harmed him and his friends. I think that Light Arrow should have waited to talk to Harry about the school's rules when it comes to magical training.

    I don't agree with Light Arrow's assessment that Maya acted with maturity during this excursion. The way he put it made it sound like she did so during the entire trip when the truth is he only really showed any understanding or maturity during the final stretch of the return journey. A little too late in my mind. I'm also rather uncomfortable with Light Arrow being the one to go to Harry. It's clear that he doesn't really know how to treat or deal with the child.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, Harry will have his ups and downs and the feeling of hate will need some time to vanish. The decision about school isn't final like Light Arrow already said it and the concept of the camp is to let the kids heal in their own pace. That means sometimes you need to go different ways and why should Light Arrow deny Harry the school from the beginning? Harry would just feel more controled and out of any decision.

     Maya behaved very mature. She has learned a lot in the camp. She was angry with Light Arrow for making her go with the boys but in the end made the right decsion and help Draco and Harry. She put her own desires away. Light Arrow praised her for this. If you would ask Draco, he would also thank Maya for her help. Harry is irrational at the moment, so we don't need to ask him.

     The idea of sending Maya, Draco and Harry together was a mistake of Light Arrow, but I don't want to write Mary Sue characters and in social work you often make wrong decisions because there is no guide for total right and total wrong things. You often need to try to depend on your intuition. Light Arrow is a very experience and good man, but even he is no god. He is human and sometimes makes wrong decisions.

    I don't know why you think so poor about Light Arrow, but he knows what he does and of all people in the camp he is the best to go and speak with Harry right now. Harry has very serious problems at the moment and he needs help or otherwise won't make it out of it in one. Maybe you will think better of Light Arrow after the next chapter. I'm not sure, but I hope so.

     Thank you very much for your detailed review! They always give me much to thin about.

    Sunny

Title: Chapter 32 - Frustration 25 May 2010 9:53 am
Reviewer: Emma (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow!!! such a good chapter!! i can't wait for more!!! please update again soon!!!

    Author's Response:  Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 32 - Frustration 25 May 2010 3:43 am
Reviewer: April (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm glad he's not affecting Draco as much anymore! I can't wait for your next chapter!

    Author's Response:  Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 32 - Frustration 24 May 2010 11:06 pm
Reviewer: FaeChild (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh I cant wait for the next chapter. I cant wait to see how Light Arrow handles this situation. And its great to see Draco healing a little each time. I hope Harry makes a bit of progress too sometime :) Well done ~FaeChild

    Author's Response: The next chapters will almost be completely about Harry's problems and his progress in the healing. Then it will be Draco who needs a bit more attention again. Thank you very much for your review!

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