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Reviews For Cherokee Camp
Title: Chapter 39 - Awaking 15 Jan 2011 12:12 am
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    it was nice to see the four of them relaxed

    Author's Response: :)
Title: Chapter 39 - Awaking 25 Jul 2010 3:35 am
Reviewer: Kuroi_1992 (Signed) [Report This]
    Hey,
    since it is again in the middle of the night and in my holidays I thought I could try a review again. As you can see I found another of your stories and again I like it very much. It is an idea I never read before and is written very well. I do not have background infos about the topic but it seems realistic to me. What I do not really like is the fact, that they are not permitted to use magic at the camp but I see the reasons why it is that way. I hope Harry and Draco will learn a bit wandless magic at some point of the story because I would like to read a bit more magic and I would like to see how wandless magic can be performed and what are the limits within your story. I read some stories with wandless magic before and in the most it was overpowered and not realistic even for it being magic.

    Kuroi

    Author's Response:

    Light Arrow will explain the different between wandless magic and normal magic in a chapter and at least Harry will learn to use it!

    Thank you very much for your review! 

Title: Chapter 39 - Awaking 19 Jul 2010 8:46 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that the boys had no lasting ill effects from the sweat lodge. Light Arrow's reaction when Draco said he last remembered walking in a forest was interesting. I wonder if/when he will ask Draco about that?

    The 'shaving' scene was really sweet. It shows that Black Hawk has made quite a lot of progress in getting Harry to trust him more. The teasing at breakfast only made this group of people seem more like a family, which is good for the boys.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! 
Title: Chapter 39 - Awaking 18 Jul 2010 12:42 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great to see an update :) I always look forward to seeing them so much :)

    Author's Response: Thank you! At least one review for this chapter. You made me smile! :)

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