Title: Not Such a Protector, After All
| 12 Jun 2014 12:46 am
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Reviewer: crotia (Signed)
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This was nice. Will there be a continuation?
Title: Not Such a Protector, After All
| 16 Nov 2013 7:28 am
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Reviewer: Elizabeth (Anonymous)
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Please continue. I love this story.
Title: Not Such a Protector, After All
| 20 Sep 2013 10:31 am
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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Duuuuuuuuuuude Conntinue with this aweesome story neeeeeeeed to reeeeeaaaad moreeeee
im glad that minnerva and severus took notice! please update soon!
I really like this. Harry and Snape's interactions feel so real! And Umbridge, why, she's positively horrid, isn't she? I do love your portrayal of her.
Horrible and ridiculous.
I love your writing style too, I see no spelling errors or gramatical ones. And it flows very nicely. I also loved how you showed us what Snape had been doing before he entered the bathroom.
--Alis Syn
Aw, Severus... you're far too critical on yourself. You're here now, to assist, to make him feel better... And maybe next time you'll be more aware of the signs and can step in.
Looking forward to more! Great job! misundersnape...
Woah - nice job with Umbridge's nasty, yet nice demeanour. And ouch, poor Harry... that sound painful from here.
And yes, of course it would be Snape - who else has such inconvenient timing... ;)
misundersnape...
Very cool. Will there be more? Will Snape become a better protector?
Title: Not Such a Protector, After All
| 13 Dec 2010 5:07 pm
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Reviewer: Caesara (Signed)
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So good! It's sad how hurt harry was and that detnetnion scene was unbearable! BUT i really do think this is great! :) I can't wait to see what happens next!!
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