Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 1 16 Jun 2009 1:03 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Please post more. This is turning out to be a great story.

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I'm writing the next chapter at the moment, hopefully wont take longer than a week to update ^^
Title: Chapter 1 16 Jun 2009 12:37 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    This is interesting. Several nice ideas as Severus remembering slowly throughout the year, or Harry being back in his cupboard make it different than the other stories. I am looking forward reading the next chapter. Mila

    Author's Response: Thankyou ^^ Knowing that the Severitus challenge has been so popular, I know many things have already been done - but I hope to make this my own and shake things up a bit ^^ Glad you enjoyed! ^^ I'm working on the next chapter at the moment, so an update should be within the week ^^
Title: Chapter 1 16 Jun 2009 10:35 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    LOVE this so far. I like your writing style. I really like the way the memories are revealed for Severus. Much fun - I'm adding it to my favorites list.

    Author's Response: Thankyou very much! ^^
Title: Chapter 1 16 Jun 2009 10:09 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my! I can't wait to read more. This is very interesting.

    Go on the shout box and ask if anyone is interested in betaing for you, or there is a place on the top for beta readers apparantly.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it ^^ And thanks for the advice! ^^
Title: Prologue 16 Jun 2009 9:56 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I guess that Harry's starting to change his appearance. Right? Hmm, can't wait to see that.

    Poor Harry. Having to sleep again in the closet. Is that because Petunia has noticed the changes in his appearance I wonder.

    Nice start. Off to read some more...

    Author's Response: Thanks - I'm glad you're enjoying it ^^
Title: Chapter 1 16 Jun 2009 8:46 am
Reviewer: JAM (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is good. Even though it covers previously traveled ground, it is not just a repeat. I really like the idea that Lily "refreshes" Snape's memories gradually, and the fact that he is disconcerted by the changes, even before knowing what they are about, is realistic. Everything he thought he knew is being changed. Please keep writing this story!

    Author's Response: With the Severitus challenge having been so well loved, I know a lot of ground has been trod - but I'm hoping to make this my own and shake things up, even a little ^^ I'm writing the next chapter at the moment, so it shouldn't be too much longer til the next update ^^
Title: Chapter 1 16 Jun 2009 7:44 am
Reviewer: Vicki (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like this start! I enjoyed how Severus was slowly coming to terms with his returning memories, and your explanation for his behavior at the end of the Occlumency lessons. I hope we get to see more of his improved relationship with Lily, and James as well. You've made the Dursleys' abuse very believable, and I like how trapped Harry feels.

    If you still want a beta, feel free to email me at greeneyes3048@yahoo.com. I'm an accredited beta from Perfect Imagination, and I've betaed for several authors, including some in the HP fandom.

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you enjoyed it so far ^^ There will be continued snippets given about his recovered memories, so things will be seen, promise!

    Thanks for the BETA offer - I'll email you later about it. 


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