Well, I'm glad you like most of it! About your issues with Remus - there are reasons for both of those things. The characters in this story are sort of based off of the characters in another one of my stories posted on FF.net. In that story, Remus and Harry have spent a bit more time together. I know that's kind of AU, but I never said this story was supposed to be canon.

Harry's attachment to Remus comes from his attachment to Sirius. He spent just as much if not less time with Sirius than he did with Remus, yet he became even more attached to Sirius. Harry was looking for that fatherly affection wherever he could get it, and after Sirius' death, he transfered that attachment to Remus because they shared that connection - love for Sirius. Maybe it's not coming off quite right, but Harry really isn't that attached to Remus. This will all make more sense later on in the story.

Remus' write off of Sirius will also be explained later on in the story, so I don't want to give too much away right now. Remus is essentially on the rebound, as harsh as that sounds. I can't say much more than that, but it'll be explained later. 

I'm glad you like the teen's behaviour, and I'm very happy to hear that you found my Severus' to be appropriately in character. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, and I hope you continue to read!

-Julz