| Title: The Final Goodbye
| 20 Aug 2015 9:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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awwww my god i had tears during the funeral Arthur is defintly loved character and percy he may be on hte outs but he is still a weasly and i am glad to see the others fogriving him we all know it takes forever for the twins to come around
I think you should make the 7th years its own story. It would just make this one wrapped up and complete, yet part of something larger. There's a great satisfaction that comes with something completed, that most writers (including myself) love. And then that makes you only more excited to continue on with new ideas, such as the next installment of the story!
Great work, keep it up! I hope we'll get to see some Lucius/Draco interaction, maybe? *grins hopefully* That would be a wonderful way to close up that chapter of his personal problems, and add more drama and angst (YAY, ANGST!) at the same time.
Now we need to gurad Draco from Lucius don't we? Just how rabid will be be after all this time in Azkaban? OR will he think that he needs to protect DRaco?
Thanks for the update.
V.
Oh my God. That was such a sad scene at Arthur's funeral, but I really love this story, and I'm so happy when you updated.
I really hope that Severus is allowed to adopt Harry, and I think that Severus being honest about Remus might just help, not hinder their chances.
I think that that was very sweet also that Severus wanted to acknowledge Remus, because he was proud of their relationship.
I hope that Snape can help Remus heal from his grief for Sirius.
I can't wait for more Julz. The idea of a sequel makes me want to do the happy dance!! :)
This was a fully emotionally chapter and you wrote it beautifully xx
Well done!!! Take a bow!!
More soon please xx
Ah! You can't just leave it THERE!!! OMG!! What a fantastic chapter, I'm anxiously anticipating more!
Wow-this was a wonderfully written and fully enthralling chapter
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