Poor Harry! He tried so hard to protect Draco and his thanks is being given the boot. I'm glad that Harry was at least able to get his father to understand the reasons behind his keeping that memory to himself. Draco did tell him not to tell anyone...and anyone would include Draco. Harry only did as he was asked.
Great chapter!
| Title: Promises
| 03 Feb 2010 7:31 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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Great Chapter, my favorite part was the three boys together in defence class. Apparently Sev it was not a good idea to put the three in a group together. Now, please post soon so that draco and harry can get back together and we can all sleep better.
A Expertly written chapter--but I think you are wise to sleep with one eye closed. That was torture of the highest order and now Moony is "trying" to get in touch. Will that make things better or worse?
At least Hermione is a ray or reason in a crazy world for Harry.
MOre soon please.
V.
I hope Severus does forgive him...I hope Draco forgives Harry and I hope the next chapter will be soon xxx
9/10
First off, let me say that I truly enjoyed this chapter. As usual, your dialogue is extremely well written and your storyline entertaining.
I think a credit may be owed to both the writers of Forest Gump and Taylor Swift? It seems lines from their works were used in this chapter.
They were well used in context though. Thanks again for a great chapter.
You know, this is one of the best stories on here, and you deserve many more reviews than you get.
I love this story, and your writing is very moving. For instance, my eyes were watering in this last chapter!!
I want to hug poor Harry. But I'm so so pleased that finally Draco and Severus see that they've been unfair to Harry. Gotta love Hermione for knocking some sense into Draco. Love it!!!
Wonderful wonderful chapter. Now I want more though!!!
I'm legally blind and my vision is just over the limit of being legally blind. 20/400 is legally blind. 20/50 is no where near legally blind. 20/50 just means, what people see with regular sight see at 20 feet away, people with 20/50 see at 50 feet away. So, without my contacts or glasses, I can barely see my hand in front of my face. Does that make sense?
But other than the vision thing, good job! I love it!
| Title: Come Hell or High Water
| 13 Jan 2010 3:13 am
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| Reviewer: wolfawaken (Anonymous)
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wow...so much angst!!! i loved it! it was wonderfully written. I loved how you portrayed harrys emotions at the end and severus was great, if a bit harsh but i think that he is at the end of his rope. cant wait to read more!!!!
wooo, angst angst i love it. The only i love more than angst? The fluff that comes afterwards. Or at least the 'I'm sorry, your sorry' kinda stuff.
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