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Title: Prologue 24 Jun 2009 4:45 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, very nice start. I'm very intrigued and you write so well. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, and see where you're taking this story. Very interesting indeed.

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad I caught you so well! That's one of the most challenging things when it comes to fan fiction; catching the reader's attention immediately from the beginning. In many fics, you usually have to read 3 or 4 chapters in to have your interests piqued. How boring is that? Thanks for reading and reviewing!

    -Julz

Title: Prologue 24 Jun 2009 4:27 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    This is good so far, but I can't help but feel like I've read it before. Have you posted it elsewhere? Like on Fanfiction.net? Anyway, good so far. Want to see what happens. :-)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I have indeed posted it on Fanfiction.net. It's actually up to 13 chapters over on FF. I just recently discovered this site, so I decided to go ahead and post it here as well! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

    -Julz

Title: Prologue 24 Jun 2009 4:17 am
Reviewer: Maquislady1388 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow. You have me intrigued. Snape swearring an unbreakable vow to protect Harry is something I've never read before. I really hope that vow includes protecting Harry from Dumbledore as well. I know the old man means well but he's so focused on the greater good that he can't always see whats best for Harry as an individual.

    I'm hoping you avoid the usual Cliche's and pit falls. It's been a long time since I've read a good Mentor Snape story that's more then just gratouitus Weasley and Dumbledore Bashing.

    Author's Response:

    *Nervous cough* Well, there's not too much Weasley or Dumbledore bashing to come, but I will admit there IS some within the story so far. I feel your pain; I was so sick of the half-arsed mentor Snape fics that I decided it was high time to write my own! I hope it doesn't turn out cliche either, that would be very disappointing me and my readers. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

    -Julz

Title: Prologue 24 Jun 2009 2:40 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like it so far. You've written the characters very well and believably. Your writing is impressive as well. I am very interested in reading the rest of the story. Especially to find out how Remus will fit into this story.

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you're liking it so far! I hope you continue to think my characters are true to form as the rest of the story develops. I must admit that keeping everyone in character, especially Snape, is my biggest fear and pet peeve when it comes to EVERYTHING I write. Thanks so much for the wonderful compliments, and I hope you continue to read! Remus will enter again soon...have no fear lol.

    -Julz


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